Inkin Artist

[Ka0t1c]

incomplete thoughts repeat that i can not defeat, am i weak
it's just so tough to be beat cuz i don't want to suffer but speak
what i have become from my kinks as if no other believes
since i have fought long thru instincts beyond to achieve
such a relief, now i'm stronger the monster's released
cuz i sought after peace when i was shoved off the streets
still my rough spots must cease or love's lost to reach
enough puzzles i meet, i struggle to seek my custom technique
i'm done feeling teased, i trust you'll agree once my clutter is freed
cuz then the posture will flee looking flustered indeed
the imposters in me cost me my key to come and to be
at common entry to constantly see my flaws i've received
i'll probably adjust and take heed to the one, he who leads
to keep calm and proceed cautious, i need something to read
and watch how i run with good speed on my journey
making them nauseous cuz my achin for knowledge
raises up controversy til the day i am under
my way brought me hunger, the challenge they bring
but i am king with this armor, to drama i ring...

my patience has parted and by angels i'm guarded
paintin it harder to aim in all angles they'll target
so start gainin your partners but powerful strength i do harness
you know i stay in the garden, i harvest your pain out your carcass

who are ya, a saint or have you always remained as the heartless?

[Ka0t1c]

ok, hope i fixed the end up for ya, thanx for the feed, much appreciated

*just fixed the beginning too

[Slim Zaddy]

it's good man , i liked it , you had some good vocab , nice multies, and flow was good and catchy , good concept too , actually it's a good drop keep it up ,

[Ka0t1c]

thanx man, i'll try to keep my skill up

[mcZu]

Enjoyable to say the least, flow seemed flawless, it was good strcutered and teh vocab was above average. Solid drop, enjoyed each line.

[Ka0t1c]

thanx for checkin this out

[Solace]

Yeah I agree, shit was nice. Nothing to say here that others didn't say. Keep up the nice pieces Kaotic.

[Ka0t1c]

thanx