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Here's the attention you want

Postby James R. » Mar 18th, '09, 05:19

16 bars so you feel special. keep my name out ya vocab and learn to fucking read.

Hold up a minute, I gotta say this is a shock to me
You don’t even talk to me what’s good bitch you stalkin me?
I’m askin b, do you really think this trash is beef?
I aint Austin P so fuck a mini me of Cassidy
You talking how you’re crazy and your holdin fours
Aiyo I aint even think Canadians could go to war
Your basis is basic your whole style is stasis
You’re so average, I’ll jack into your brain like Matrix
Don’t feed me shit about how you been on hiatus
You threw shots now Im comin back got your pupils dilated
We all know how Rocky ended son Apollo kept the title
You started out decent but now your progression’s idle
You fuckin failed man that diss was disastrous
Take a few seconds thought before contractin cancer kid
And don’t write some bull shit like I won’t answer it
But if you do then please don’t post that trashy shit
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Re: Here's the attention you want

Postby <Stiiccy> » Mar 18th, '09, 05:31

j-roc just got fuckin owned
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Re: Here's the attention you want

Postby Arabian Shady » Mar 18th, '09, 07:03

well written , straight to the point and clever rhymes.
cool diss man :y:

i liked the laid back style, sick shit
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So when we face rage, Ya'll fake it and let THEM commit horrific crimes
50 years & going straight, Yet this performance aint worth your time,OUR
Shit is BACKSTAGE,Cause the front page aint worth Kashmir and Palestine.
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Re: Here's the attention you want

Postby Slim Zaddy » Mar 18th, '09, 14:06

James R. wrote:16 bars so you feel special. keep my name out ya vocab and learn to fucking read.

Hold up a minute, I gotta say this is a shock to me
You don’t even talk to me what’s good bitch you stalkin me?
I’m askin b, do you really think this trash is beef?
I aint Austin P so fuck a mini me of Cassidy
You talking how you’re crazy and your holdin fours
Aiyo I aint even think Canadians could go to war
Your basis is basic your whole style is stasis
You’re so average, I’ll jack into your brain like Matrix
Don’t feed me shit about how you been on hiatus
Take a few seconds thought before contractin cancer kid
And don’t write some bull shit like I won’t answer it
But if you do then please don’t post that trashy shit


dope lines ,, James,, really sick multies and used of vocab ,, nice to see you here again bro :b: :b: :b: :b: :worship:
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Re: Here's the attention you want

Postby J Roc » Mar 18th, '09, 19:04

James R. wrote:16 bars so you feel special. keep my name out ya vocab and learn to fucking read.

Hold up a minute, I gotta say this is a shock to me
You don’t even talk to me what’s good bitch you stalkin me?
I’m askin b, do you really think this trash is beef?
I aint Austin P so fuck a mini me of Cassidy
You talking how you’re crazy and your holdin fours
Aiyo I aint even think Canadians could go to war
Your basis is basic your whole style is stasis
You’re so average, I’ll jack into your brain like Matrix
Don’t feed me shit about how you been on hiatus
You threw shots now Im comin back got your pupils dilated
We all know how Rocky ended son Apollo kept the title
You started out decent but now your progression’s idle
You fuckin failed man that diss was disastrous
Take a few seconds thought before contractin cancer kid
And don’t write some bull shit like I won’t answer it
But if you do then please don’t post that trashy shit

Hahahhh ... There we go ... Nice Disss :y: :y:
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Re: Here's the attention you want

Postby Solace » Mar 18th, '09, 19:08

Dope :y:
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Re: Here's the attention you want

Postby James R. » Mar 18th, '09, 19:48

Thanks peeps
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