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Postby J Roc » Mar 19th, '09, 04:01

Just Some Punchline Practise ... Nothing Speciall hahah ... Already got tha Concept for tha Next Cypher :D

I'm HONEST IN TEXT DAWG , But Sticcy Gotta STOP WITH THE SEX TALK
I Can't Tell YOUR PAST THOUGH Cuz i Came "FORE SHADOW" like SONIC THE HEDGEHOG!!!
Me not COCKING & FLEX YALL ?
is like Saying ARTISTS WITH PENS , JOTS Can't DRAW ME A PET ROCK!!
Why i keep TALKING BOUT DEATH YALL? cuz Like 'ONYX' MY TEXT "DARK"!!! (in case u never knew!)
Fuck a Headache , I'm On SEXTAPES YELLING
And "I Swear" (Ice Wear) Shes hot" .. Like Shes a NECKLACE..MELTING!!!
Punches ain't HITTING ME So i guess James R Got Beef like MICKIE D'S
But he ain't on My dick so i can't call him STICCY Z (Haha!)
Smh @ When ADULTS ATTACK CHILDS , Wayy Worse Then Sticcy TALKING BOUT LIGHTERS...
GLOATIN AT J? give him a Trip To The "SODIAM CAVES" To Teach About "A SALT" ON A "MINOR/MINER"
Damn! ...

Liiightworkk with the punches/wordplay , cept the last one lol .... i upped tha multie complexity a bit in the beginning haha ... try n keep up :D Killa Season!
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Re: warm Upp ...

Postby J Roc » Mar 19th, '09, 04:05

hahah Wasn't meant to be a diss when i started ... Ahh welll :whistle:
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Postby <Stiiccy> » Mar 19th, '09, 04:06

add another diss to the list...your like the tenth kid this month to take a shot at me...thanks for the free promo dogg :flower:
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Re: warm Upp ...

Postby J Roc » Mar 19th, '09, 04:08

haha Your Welcome :D ... Good luck on being better then me too ;)
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Postby <Stiiccy> » Mar 19th, '09, 04:18

J roc wrote:haha Your Welcome :D ... Good luck on being better then me too ;)

right...and ill just sit here sipping my mountain dew whatching my myspace page be overloaded with plays while you just sit over there wishing you had a microphone
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Postby J Roc » Mar 19th, '09, 04:20

i gotta question before i get off thoughh ... do you EVER get offline besides for school n sleep ? :S ... i'm willing to bet my paycheck you spend OVER half ur free time online lolz .... Welll i'll see you nighttime tomorow cuz i KNOW you'll be on lol .... not in the afternoon cuz im chilling with this girl that likes me hahahah ... shit like that possible when u go outside ,ya know? lol! .. i'm out though , 1


and ill just sit here sipping my mountain dew whatching my myspace page be overloaded with plays while you just sit over there wishing you had a microphone"

and funny u say that ... just show's how much of a loser you are hahahh have fun online bud ;)
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Postby B.A.D. » Mar 19th, '09, 04:28

<Stiiccy> wrote:add another diss to the list...your like the tenth kid this month to take a shot at me...thanks for the free promo dogg :flower:


I think he wants you to give him free promo hahaha

cuz I don't think anyone knows this dude exists
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Postby <Stiiccy> » Mar 19th, '09, 04:39

J roc wrote:i gotta question before i get off thoughh ... do you EVER get offline besides for school n sleep ? :S ... i'm willing to bet my paycheck you spend OVER half ur free time online lolz .... Welll i'll see you nighttime tomorow cuz i KNOW you'll be on lol .... not in the afternoon cuz im chilling with this girl that likes me hahahah ... shit like that possible when u go outside ,ya know? lol! .. i'm out though , 1


and ill just sit here sipping my mountain dew whatching my myspace page be overloaded with plays while you just sit over there wishing you had a microphone"

and funny u say that ... just show's how much of a loser you are hahahh have fun online bud ;)

Yes I stay online alot...I also have a girlfreind that lives across town...and i go over to her house every day considering i pick her up from school...

I stay online alot because i dont like clubbing and partying...id rather chill at the house and hang with my girl and whatch a movie...
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Postby Solace » Mar 19th, '09, 22:18

You do realize that putting "!!!!!!!!!!" at the end of your lines doesnt make your piece any better, right?
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Postby J Roc » Mar 19th, '09, 22:28

@ Sticcy..... What About Friends? haha..u Got a Girl , Congrats ... Don't Mean She's hot Though lol

@ That Solace Kid Above Me^ ... Nope , It's Good Anyways ... (He Obviously Don't Think So Though!) ... haha If You Don't Think What I Do Is complex , Try Doing It ... Then Post It lol ;)

And @ That Big Ax Kid .... I Love how This Site Ride's Each Other's nuts Lollll .... He Was in EVERY Thread i Made , And Was Saying Shit About My Drops lol .... It "Suck's" But He Can't Help but Read Em lol ... I Don't Care What He Does lol , Its ah Eminem FAN SITE .... Jeez You People Think Ya'll Famous Or some Shit haha ... And Think Your Dope Cause Other People On This Site Think You Are , But nobody Off This Site Think's Anyone On Here Is Good Hahah ....

And Coleon , If My Verses Are Annoying , Don't Read Em lol .... Ur Seriously Dumb lol , DONT READ EM ;) ... And Every Time i'm On , Sticcy is On ... I noticed It Before I Went Ghost lol ... he just Said He Spends His Time Online , UR DUMBBBBBBBBBBBBBB hahahaha

Your All Flamer's Or Some Shit hahah
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Re: warm Upp ...

Postby J Roc » Mar 19th, '09, 22:29

Sticcy's on Right now Actually hahah .... And I Said i was Going outside , I Never Posted Since ... "Go Out Side Or Something" ... Omg Ur so Dumbbbb @ coleon
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Postby Solace » Mar 19th, '09, 22:31

J roc wrote:@ That Solace Kid Above Me^ ... Nope , It's Good Anyways ... (He Obviously Don't Think So Though!) ... haha If You Don't Think What I Do Is complex , Try Doing It ... Then Post It lol ;)

I didnt say i didnt think it was good nor that i dont think it is complex.
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Postby J Roc » Mar 19th, '09, 22:34

Coleon wrote:if I'm so dumb why respond to me twice?

internet rebels smh


Because I'm Telling You how Dumb you Are? N I'm an Internet rebel lol ... i'm not tha one with over 1400 posts in three months , going into Threads and talking shit to people who talk shit to other people am i lol ..... sounds like ur Riding Sticcy's Dick Hard Mang :o
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Postby <Stiiccy> » Mar 19th, '09, 22:36

J roc wrote:@ Sticcy..... What About Friends? haha..u Got a Girl , Congrats ... Don't Mean She's hot Though lol

@ That Solace Kid Above Me^ ... Nope , It's Good Anyways ... (He Obviously Don't Think So Though!) ... haha If You Don't Think What I Do Is complex , Try Doing It ... Then Post It lol ;)

And @ That Big Ax Kid .... I Love how This Site Ride's Each Other's nuts Lollll .... He Was in EVERY Thread i Made , And Was Saying Shit About My Drops lol .... It "Suck's" But He Can't Help but Read Em lol ... I Don't Care What He Does lol , Its ah Eminem FAN SITE .... Jeez You People Think Ya'll Famous Or some Shit haha ... And Think Your Dope Cause Other People On This Site Think You Are , But nobody Off This Site Think's Anyone On Here Is Good Hahah ....

And Coleon , If My Verses Are Annoying , Don't Read Em lol .... Ur Seriously Dumb lol , DONT READ EM ;) ... And Every Time i'm On , Sticcy is On ... I noticed It Before I Went Ghost lol ... he just Said He Spends His Time Online , UR DUMBBBBBBBBBBBBBB hahahaha

Your All Flamer's Or Some Shit hahah

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Postby <Stiiccy> » Mar 19th, '09, 22:37

J roc wrote:@ Sticcy..... What About Friends? haha..u Got a Girl , Congrats ... Don't Mean She's hot Though lol

@ That Solace Kid Above Me^ ... Nope , It's Good Anyways ... (He Obviously Don't Think So Though!) ... haha If You Don't Think What I Do Is complex , Try Doing It ... Then Post It lol ;)

And @ That Big Ax Kid .... I Love how This Site Ride's Each Other's nuts Lollll .... He Was in EVERY Thread i Made , And Was Saying Shit About My Drops lol .... It "Suck's" But He Can't Help but Read Em lol ... I Don't Care What He Does lol , Its ah Eminem FAN SITE .... Jeez You People Think Ya'll Famous Or some Shit haha ... And Think Your Dope Cause Other People On This Site Think You Are , But nobody Off This Site Think's Anyone On Here Is Good Hahah ....

And Coleon , If My Verses Are Annoying , Don't Read Em lol .... Ur Seriously Dumb lol , DONT READ EM ;) ... And Every Time i'm On , Sticcy is On ... I noticed It Before I Went Ghost lol ... he just Said He Spends His Time Online , UR DUMBBBBBBBBBBBBBB hahahaha

Your All Flamer's Or Some Shit hahah

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