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Lyrical Shit (20 minutes)

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Lyrical Shit (20 minutes)

Postby MC Anonymous » Mar 20th, '09, 19:04

the oceanic titanic navigation through tracks
I black and blue backs, and kill those who's wack
global LAN connection, teleport from here to you
now who's fearing who? your heart I'm spearing through
tearing through tissues, hit you with missles
spit flu, grip and kill you with dual action pistols
lyrical menace, cast a shadow upon your figure
as it cuts your shadow's throat, black blood drips quicker
now tell me who's sicker? I'm above speculation
tech the nation like old school industrialization
I bust these flows like acient egyptian's Nile River
stick my dick in the core, watch Mother Nature quiver
she gave birth to darkness, how night time came to be
the right rhymes slain all beef, it's the same to me
mess with me, askin' for your brain to bleed
step in my mind, now I'm in'sane'.. I need
more ink, your shore stinks, my shore's pink
flow dope with methane rivers, see what my core thinks
tablets made of concrete, written lyrical equations
when it comes to mainstream MC's, typical deflation
I'm filled with agression, my gun sling puns sting
I'm funding all ill rhymes, all using one thing
called stunting, verse fiends can start they munching
eating wack MC's, so my autotune lunch sings
insomiac, remember my anger? I'm calming that
eyes open for predators, I'm bombing tracks
disolving wack, revolving revolvers in your back
chaingun type shit, while I'm spittin' more crack
my lyrical 'for'cast rocks the sky like Mount Rushmore
Some albino got me angry, can't trush whores...
LMFAO@ Brittney, bitch looking worse than a chupacabra mixed with a broken down coyote. You're disgusting ugly, so ugly in fact, my brain simultaneously exploded while processing how bitterly grotesque you look. I would much rather stick ice picks into the walls of my cranium, then stick my dick into your quagmire of a clitoris. You're what would happen if a sperm whale mated with a Godzilla fish..


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Re: Lyrical Shit (20 minutes)

Postby theJFKshow » Mar 20th, '09, 20:53

What the fuck are you talking about
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Re: Lyrical Shit (20 minutes)

Postby Spyder » Mar 20th, '09, 21:43

pretty sick man
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Re: Lyrical Shit (20 minutes)

Postby Slim Zaddy » Mar 21st, '09, 16:42

Good Shit Homie , i love it .. flow is good , you got the complexity it's dope , i liked your rhymes they are good , it's dope for 20 minutes , keep it up man , ,9/10 :y:
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