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Our own rap songs.

Postby Eminem J » Mar 22nd, '09, 15:37

Rap Song
Ahh yes rap songs.
Isnt that what were all here for.

So any of you have rap songs that you made.
I'm sure you do.So if you have some post them here.

Heres one my friend made.It kind od cracks you up but see what yout think.

Its called lost my penis:

Yetredsy my penis was deep down in your hole,
Today I'm on the roll but without no penis doh,
You put me down and I threw you onto the ground,
Then went out and threw a rock at your window,
Next went to play some bingo,Yes number 29,
I was so happy I went and commited a crime,
I got arrested then got pissed with the it,
Next day I was set free I went to on the street,
And this bitch saw me,
Do want me to stick my penis up your hole,
NO!
Then go,I went driven,Felt like I was riden,
Next every thing went black,And my balls felt sorr,
I woke up in the hospital and said ''WHERE'S MY DAM PENIS GONE? :D
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Re: Our own rap songs.

Postby James R. » Mar 22nd, '09, 15:38

*can't do anything but laugh*
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Re: Our own rap songs.

Postby Eminem J » Mar 22nd, '09, 15:40

What did I tell you.
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Postby James R. » Mar 22nd, '09, 15:42

That you lost your penis... you realize there are 2 forums for "our own rap songs" right? Creative Writing for this... piece you have here. And then audio stage for people who record
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Postby Eminem J » Mar 22nd, '09, 15:43

I'm new.Sorry man. :y:
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Postby James R. » Mar 22nd, '09, 15:47

S'all good man.
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Postby Eminem J » Mar 22nd, '09, 15:53

Cya around man :y:
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Postby Rabbi » Mar 22nd, '09, 16:00

Its aiight but there is something about it that doesn't flow maybe its because i just woke up and am reading it kind of far from the screen
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Postby Solace » Mar 22nd, '09, 18:18

This reminded me of that music video for Royces "Part Of Me"
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Postby mcZu » Mar 23rd, '09, 16:12

Solace wrote:This reminded me of that music video for Royces "Part Of Me"


First thing that poped up in my head was that video, great minds think alike.
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Postby neversnooze » Mar 23rd, '09, 16:28

it was funny lol and welcome to tr bro
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