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Vague Story

Postby mcZu » Mar 23rd, '09, 15:51

Instrumental http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=N02soM-EtjY

Evolution of lyrics backwards; ‘No it u love’
Revolution rewinded; ‘No it u lover’
Missing the S, so it’s a story concerning no ex
Wishing to ask, sounded the horn with a Y
While the other was closed, looking past the hoes
Opening up windows, like XP shows, I try to win dough,
Though it comes with a P-rice, mi-grain twice,
Needed an ass-pirin, she said but; and turned backwards to the ceiling,
Stomach interacts, with the sheets in fact; coming in with a dash,
Her eye gain, a liquid like stain, coloured white coming from the main,
Shaft, she took a shower fast, got her legs waxed, then she got dressed,
Gave me a kiss like the lox, ‘Ciao my love’ came out her voice box,
Replied the same, applied my game, her name matched mine,
She always in my mind, replay the content of my mind,
She mind blowing like a multi syllable rhyme, exclusive
Like an old aged wine, young lady with a gorgeous body line,
Story about to seek signs, of an ending episode of rhymes,
To be the continued in some other lines…

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Re: Vague Story

Postby Xray » Mar 23rd, '09, 15:54

Pretty smart lines man, that was really good. Good drop man, keep it coming.
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Re: Vague Story

Postby mcZu » Mar 23rd, '09, 16:21

^Thanks man, appreciate the fact that you read it :y:
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Re: Vague Story

Postby Slim Zaddy » Mar 23rd, '09, 16:41

mcZu wrote:Instrumental http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=N02soM-EtjY


Needed an ass-pirin, she said but; and turned backwards to the ceiling,
Stomach interacts, with the sheets in fact; coming in with a dash,
Her eye gain, a liquid like stain, coloured white coming from the main,
Shaft, she took a shower fast, got her legs waxed, then she got dressed,


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yup man , pretty good shit ,, as same said clever lines, i particularly love these . good job , i would love to see it complete .. keep it up homie :y:
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