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In The Eyes Of Solace

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In The Eyes Of Solace

Postby Solace » Mar 24th, '09, 01:36

I haven't dropped shit..Felt like writing this:

[Hook x2]
Backstabbed, harassed, beaten and never asked,
More stuff taken of mine than I actually ever had,
A wandering soul doomed to eternal misery,
Well misery loves company so I'm taking you with me.

[Verse]
Being swallowed by a black hole I can always scream,
But no one can hear me, it's like a surreal dream,
I've been trapped before, and I'll be trapped again,
The times I don't speak up is when I lack a pen,
Contemplate my waste of existance as I lay,
To me it matters that my matter will just pass away,
I've been asked to pay with only empty pockets,
Got a dollar one day then was harassed to drop it,
In Summer vacation I'm forced to visit my father,
Going to his funeral, no I wouldn't even bother,
I get angry, I'm not trying to act like I have it hard,
But I'm just wondering why is my life so damn scarred,
I act calm, my personal walls have been abolished,
But acting ain't enough, I need personal solace,
Past is charred, so I focus upon what lies ahead,
Will I ever get famous or lie in an alleyway dead.

[Hook x2]
Backstabbed, harassed, beaten and never asked,
More stuff taken of mine than I actually ever had,
A wandering soul doomed to eternal misery,
Well misery loves company so I'm taking you with me.

3rd Edit: Posted final piece, will be my next recorded (for improvement on flow and delivery; audio practice).
Last edited by Solace on Mar 27th, '09, 03:55, edited 3 times in total.
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Re: The Way I See It

Postby brutus09shady » Mar 24th, '09, 02:28

nice sounds liek a sick flow
you say lil wayne i say lupe fiasco
you say jim jones i say biggie smalls
you say birdman i say dr. dre
you say dipset i say nwa
you say eminem i say the greatest
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Re: The Way I See It

Postby Slim Zaddy » Mar 24th, '09, 10:35

good shit solace, sick flow . good vocab and rhymes , :y:
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Re: The Way I See It

Postby Ka0t1c » Mar 24th, '09, 11:45

Slim Zaddy wrote:good shit solace, sick flow . good vocab and rhymes , :y:



i agree, i like it!
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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Re: In The Eyes Of Solace

Postby Solace » Mar 27th, '09, 03:55

^Thanks guys! =D

:shifty: Mystical bump.
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Re: In The Eyes Of Solace

Postby Solace » Mar 27th, '09, 21:19

Thanks McMaybe :happy:
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