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Pop you in the eye I don't need spinach!!!

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Pop you in the eye I don't need spinach!!!

Postby Purple23Haze » Mar 24th, '09, 06:28

Pop you in the eye I don't need spinach
What you need is me in it
I be that which is what it is schizophrenic kids
Hear more voices than you see a face full of blemishes
Denise the menace indebted in this embedded in sentences
friends list on myspace is more than that on book the face, booked lace
Took pace make crooks race bishop took rook in a chase
Look ace shook the place cause I'm boomin' it's boone in
Public Nuisance pollution is the public truest caused plus some soothing shit
Newest ta trip since a fool imprisoned in my vision is in orange linen
Never the dividend for a sin is a sin even in oblivion
Then again my detriment is hell bent on heaven sent
Seven since is entrance exempt exams on print I'm no less than man
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Re: Pop you in the eye I don't need spinach!!!

Postby Emadyville » Mar 24th, '09, 06:54

The rhymes were good but this had no point to it and really made no sense as you just jumped around, if it was just to rhyme then you did well :y:
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Re: Pop you in the eye I don't need spinach!!!

Postby Ka0t1c » Mar 24th, '09, 11:49

it's funny, all those rhymes but no reason for em
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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Re: Pop you in the eye I don't need spinach!!!

Postby Purple23Haze » Mar 24th, '09, 16:58

Thats how my schizo mind works!
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