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! Happy Birthday !

Postby SajN » Mar 27th, '09, 11:14

Since I was born we have been friends /
18 years after it has reached its end /
Hopefully not, but it seems like it stopped /
My heart dropped, when you said don’t talk to me again /
And logged off msn, and I was like /
What the fuck man, I don’t understand /
You was afraid I wouldn’t be around you /
If I went abroad, our connection would’ve been lost /
Wasn’t that something you wanted to evade dawg? /
But now you have created what you was afraid of /
This made me mad, but also gave me tears /
Since I didn’t wanted to lose a friend, a best friend /
Someone I’ve known in almost eighteen years
We both wanna put this behind us, let’s forget when time’s up /
And share the time we have till something split us /
Happy birthday [Insert Name], I miss you, sincerely yours Fahad /



This is actually a very personal song, but since I write personal stuff I decided to put it up here.
From the lyrics you can probably guess why I wrote this.
That's why it's very simple..

I am going to record this, and send it to the friend I am talking to in the that verse^.. I thought to not say his name here (that's why the name from last sentence is removed), but when I record I will, since the recorded version will not go out in public.
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Re: ! Happy Birthday !

Postby BuzzZ » Mar 28th, '09, 16:05

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Re: ! Happy Birthday !

Postby SajN » Mar 28th, '09, 16:22

Thank for the comment :y:
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Re: ! Happy Birthday !

Postby Solace » Mar 28th, '09, 19:19

That was nice dude, hopefully you and your friend work it out. Dont get why its called happy birthday tho? I enjoyed how you made it like a letter :y:
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Re: ! Happy Birthday !

Postby SajN » Mar 28th, '09, 22:52

Props to both of you :worship:
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Re: ! Happy Birthday !

Postby Embrace » Mar 28th, '09, 23:03

wow this is deep, really gives us the gist of what is going on. hard stuff, wish we could hear the audio of this. :(
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Re: ! Happy Birthday !

Postby SajN » Mar 28th, '09, 23:08

Thank you bro!
Welcome to the forum btw :y:



I think I will put the audio out :flower:
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Re: ! Happy Birthday !

Postby Embrace » Mar 28th, '09, 23:09

SajN wrote:Thank you bro!
Welcome to the forum btw :y:



I think I will put the audio out :flower:


oh awesome, look forward to that :happy:
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Re: ! Happy Birthday !

Postby SajN » Mar 28th, '09, 23:10

I gotta do that tomorrow, since I need to go and get some sleep :flower:
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Re: ! Happy Birthday !

Postby Slim Zaddy » Mar 29th, '09, 14:58

nice man ,, good shit :y:
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Re: ! Happy Birthday !

Postby SajN » Mar 29th, '09, 15:19

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