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Re: Crazy Story

Postby Solace » Apr 1st, '09, 03:28

I skipped to reading the end and fucking lol'd. That is some fucked up shit. You never know who your dating over the internet.
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Re: Crazy Story

Postby Steve Spag » Apr 1st, '09, 03:43

HAHAHAHA. Damn brother, you never cease to amaze me. Everything about it was sick; the story, the flow and wordplay, with a funny ending. Great drop man, keep that shit up!
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Re: Crazy Story

Postby Slim Zaddy » Apr 1st, '09, 11:47

hahahah good story telling ,, and yeah ending was perfect .. gd job McMaybe :y:
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Re: Crazy Story

Postby <Stiiccy> » Apr 1st, '09, 14:37

lmfao...that song made made me lol like crazy
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Re: Crazy Story

Postby mcZu » Apr 1st, '09, 17:17

A Crazy Story indeed, nice concept. You painted a vivid story, so nice job.
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Re: Crazy Story

Postby Robbie G » Apr 3rd, '09, 01:52

Lmfao, Story was great end made me laugh. :y:
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Re: Crazy Story

Postby Dark Blue » Apr 9th, '09, 03:02

lmao pretty funny good job
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Re: Crazy Story

Postby stevethetruth » Apr 9th, '09, 03:56

it was funny as hell last line cracked me up wicked bad :y:

gotta let me see the finished product
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Re: Crazy Story

Postby Slimm » Apr 9th, '09, 13:54

lmaooo loved it man.. Reminded me of some commercial of a brother and sister camsexing without faces lol.

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