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NEW SOLACE - Bleeding Present

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NEW SOLACE - Bleeding Present

Postby Solace » Apr 2nd, '09, 22:33

[Hook x2]
Been through a lot of shit, but I don't break and cry,
Taken pride, swallowed it, and let the world just break my mind,
I've tried to better this shit, no matter how many times I try,
It instead just gets worse, so I say my final bye.

[Verse]
I'm attacked on the daily, people fucking with reality,
For no reason people get mad at me, yet actually,
It doesn't bother me, even though there's no morality,
When little fags and fucking ho's come and try to battle me,
I try to take this beef and squash it, squash it until its flat,
But I gotta be cautious, and get ready to kick some ass,
Now you're getting nauseous, cause you weren't smart,
You scribbled on a paper and rap is my current art,
When you fuck with me, there's no point in apologies,
As if you didn't mean it, now it's more like psychotic beef,
I'll tear up your entire family, ain't nobody stopping me,
It's like my policy, seriously I'm going chop your meat,
I've been embarrassed and fucked with enough lately,
So I'm throwing shit back, I just hope that you hate me,
Cause with everything you do, there's a reaction,
So come and say some shit again, I wouldn't be laughing.

[Hook x2]
Been through a lot of shit, but I don't break and cry,
Taken pride, swallowed it, and let the world just break my mind,
I've tried to better this shit, no matter how many times I try,
It instead just gets worse, so I say my final bye.

I have a specific flow so I don't really expect you to catch on, but it's not difficult. Comments and constructive criticism is appreciated :flower:
Last edited by Solace on Apr 3rd, '09, 14:10, edited 1 time in total.
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Re: Enough

Postby Solace » Apr 2nd, '09, 23:52

Coleon wrote:i liked the flow but more inside rhyme would make it smoother with long lines, lyrics were nice no problems there but i dont like the laughing part at the end, ends it too abruptly

overall nice drop, keep it up man

Thanks man.

About the flow, I have my own flow in my mind that goes pretty smoothly but I cant at all expect anyone to catch it through text. Thanks again Coleon
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Re: Enough

Postby Requiem » Apr 3rd, '09, 00:13

i really liked it man. i was actually able to flow it pretty well, becuase i've heard u rap before, so i kinda got ur style down :smoking:
nice rhymes man, multies were good, and i loved the overall structure.

solid 8/10 man. nice drop. its bout time i dropped something :-k



btw, loved that "come and try to battle me" line :y:
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Re: NEW SOLACE - Bleeding Present

Postby Solace » Apr 3rd, '09, 14:11

Thanks Ice Killa.

I've edited it with a hook.
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Re: NEW SOLACE - Bleeding Present

Postby MC Anonymous » Apr 4th, '09, 02:43

Was pretty decent, liked the rhymes although I feel as if you were slacking when you were writing it. Overall it's solid, nothing eye-opening though. 7/10 :y:
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Re: NEW SOLACE - Bleeding Present

Postby Solace » Apr 4th, '09, 03:23

Thanks :worship:
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