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Vicious Assualt ft MC Anonymous(single)

Postby Spyder » Mar 31st, '09, 23:54

hope you like it its my new single off my album feedback welcome :sweating:


SPYDER
Serial killer with the sharpest of swords
Kill your fucking whore
Make her spontaneously combust at the core.
Who want some more?
Cuz me and MC Anonymous will get you hooked on more than phonics
And smash ur face till you talk mush mouth like ebonics,
Its hypnotic, this web the Spyder spin
Ill never get lied to again
Cuz every time I was denied it ended in sin
I came to win. Tonight’s the night we fight for our life
No time for strife and you can forget about your wife,
She’ll be next you fuckin clown, leave you sunk and drowned
So you won’t see me shoot threw her nightgown.
This is my town, ain’t nobody comin without permission
Tough decisions, but you always gotta have optimistic wishin.
But your gone fishin, they way I lay your body on the bay
The piranhas rip you flesh off before you see the light of day.

Hook(X2) – This is a vicious assault
That will keep you from breathin at all
Shittin in public bathrooms while you still in da stall

MC ANONYMOUS
Ripped up with gripped cuffs, tip stuff and spit snuff
You slipped up, tough, I'll rough up your girls cunt
field goal, punt guns, hunt nuns with demonic puns
hypnotic stuns, chronic spun my melodic stunts
I spit frequencies, hearing me is lethal see? Feeble G's
get evil deeds released on they cranium, you seeing me
you fearing me, hearing these killing sprees, to kill MC's
spill my G's, to Fill My E's, then dope up until I see
the skill in me, reveal and see, I steal all these, XTC
next to me, my text is free, rest your knees, spinal seeds
my vinyl bleeds, no final needs, my idol greed is ending me
bending trees, spending 'G's, lending these Vietnamese
a bombing CD, so they can learn about lyrical dreams
my mystical being seems to be seeing seamless streams
genius beams expel from thought, Intel is sought
Gentle your not, spit till I fill ya bill with blood clots.

SPYDER
I’m huge, colossal it’s not probable
But possible that ill drop kick you in your tonsils
Rock you with the twelve apostles
And pull your brain through your nostrils
I’m hostile, fuckin wit me will cost you
You scarin me bitch take off the Freddie Krugar costume
Use my leaguer’s volume to shoot myself til I come back and haunt you
Kill you like a monsoon, cuz I fought y’all
I’m a raw dog
Who’ll chew your knob off
Just to git in your door
Drag you across the hot top
To scrape your knees caps off
Whip bitches for talkin
Leave em retarded walkin
In nothing but a tampon and stockins.
My style u be mockin
Til it fuckin gits you killed
Throw u ina pool wita tv, rack up ur utility bill
My mentality ill, unimaginably crazy
Spaced out like Kevin Spacey
Y’all better give me that laced weed,
If you came to face me
Itll be the biggest mistake g
You ever made in you life
Like the pats draftin Tom Brady.

Hook(X2) – This is a vicious assault
That will keep you from breathin at all
Shittin in public bathrooms while you still in da stall
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Re: Vicious Assualt ft MC Anonymous(single)

Postby Spyder » Apr 1st, '09, 00:55

yeah i said it would be lacking audio, cuz i havent recorded it yet and it might be a lil bit b4 i get to. but what you think about the lyrics?
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Re: Vicious Assualt ft MC Anonymous(single)

Postby KaRtLiDgE » Apr 1st, '09, 01:24

Tom Brady worked out pretty good for the pats... If your talking about the other 31 teams make it clearer.
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Re: Vicious Assualt ft MC Anonymous(single)

Postby Spyder » Apr 1st, '09, 02:29

np but is this relaly the only feedback, cmon ppl idc what it is jus sumin good bad nice lyrics im crap just sumin lol
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Re: Vicious Assualt ft MC Anonymous(single)

Postby Solace » Apr 1st, '09, 02:37

Your lyrics arent really that good and mc anonymous just outshined you by far. Firstly you should learn structure..Lyrics will improve in time i cant say anything about it...Your shits flow is crazy...Iunno how you flow it.

Example:

Use my leaguer’s volume to shoot myself til I come back and haunt you.

Til it fuckin gits you killed


Like lines should be around the same amount of syllables. Or you could do this:

Spyder wrote:Whip bitches for talkin
Leave em retarded walkin
In nothing but a tampon and stockins.
My style u be mockin


What Spyder Should Do wrote:Whip bitches for talkin, leave em retarded walkin
In nothing but a tampon and stockins, my style u be mockin


And if your talking about your greatness in a song...Why dont you actually show that your great. Dont go like "ill kill you and destory your body" 5 times you know. Make clever punches. Im sure anonymous could help you with that.
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Re: Vicious Assualt ft MC Anonymous(single)

Postby James R. » Apr 2nd, '09, 22:59

Well I'm kinda pissed I thought you were droppin this on audio, but yeah there was no reason at all to hype this. Weak as hell on your part. Anon did his thing but your verse was sub par in every sense of the phrase
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Re: Vicious Assualt ft MC Anonymous(single)

Postby Solace » Apr 2nd, '09, 23:56

You couldnt even spell the title correcting :sweating:

Keep practicing, and dont hype your shit when you know its going to be at best average; and do note that your not actually dropping audio. No one cares if you drop lyrics for a single.
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Re: Vicious Assualt ft MC Anonymous(single)

Postby Spyder » Apr 3rd, '09, 01:07

alright thanks for the critisism guys, and i did say there wasnt gonna be audio. but o well ill talk to anon about it.
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Re: Vicious Assualt ft MC Anonymous(single)

Postby Solace » Apr 3rd, '09, 01:14

Where did you ever say there wasnt going to be audio. You made a topic and not once mentioned it being in text prior to release.
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Re: Vicious Assualt ft MC Anonymous(single)

Postby Spyder » Apr 3rd, '09, 02:19

http://www.forum.trshady.com/viewtopic.php?f=29&t=58767
notice it says its not recorded and then u said cool
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Re: Vicious Assualt ft MC Anonymous(single)

Postby Solace » Apr 3rd, '09, 02:20

Spyder wrote:http://www.forum.trshady.com/viewtopic.php?f=29&t=58767
notice it says its not recorded and then u said cool

Notice you say "its not recorded yet" which was before you released it, implying that you are would be recording it soon.
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Re: Vicious Assualt ft MC Anonymous(single)

Postby Spyder » Apr 3rd, '09, 02:37

thats true, but not by tuesday srry for the confusion. and i will put it on here once recorded
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Re: Vicious Assualt ft MC Anonymous(single)

Postby Solace » Apr 3rd, '09, 02:52

Spyder wrote:thats true, but not by tuesday srry for the confusion. and i will put it on here once recorded

Alright cool, I'll be waiting :smoking:
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Re: Vicious Assualt ft MC Anonymous(single)

Postby Spyder » Apr 3rd, '09, 23:01

wel its nice to see ppl still wanna hear it tho lol
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Re: Vicious Assualt ft MC Anonymous(single)

Postby Solace » Apr 4th, '09, 01:51

Well your a nice member so what reason do i have to not listen to it?
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