I Can See It Now ...

[J Roc]

Yeah , My VISIONS CLEAR Cuz I'm SITTING HERE THINKING WEIRD
& After ALL THESE HOURS Of Thinking HOW I CALLED HER, My Conclusions That You DIDN'T CARE
That's "Twisted" So what Do I LOOK LIKE??..SUGE KNIGHT??
They Say "Love Is Blind" So I Didn't Have GOOD SIGHT
It Wasn't Just ONE WORD.. i Said i LOVED HER Then She Said GOODBYE ='(
I Really Wish You Was HOLDING ME Cuz i Wrote You this POETRY What Did My Heart COME TO??
I Jus Want Some1 To PASS THA JOINT Cuz My BASTARD BOY Made Me See that i Still LOVE YOU
HOLD ON MAN,
I Wanna Get a HOLD ON THAT To See Why She Said She Had Tha Feelings That she KNOWS I HAVE
no You DONT HAVE THAT ,
Cuz AFTER THE STRESS She ADDED MY FRIENDS n Said She'd GO ON CAM?? </3

i can't find tha words to express how im really feeling ... Just Needed to write About it a Bit , 1

[Slim Zaddy]

They Say "Love Is Blind" So I Didn't Have GOOD SIGHT
It Wasn't Just ONE WORD.. i Said i LOVED HER Then She Said GOODBYE ='(
I Really Wish You Was HOLDING ME Cuz i Wrote You this POETRY What Did My Heart COME TO??
I Jus Want Some1 To PASS THA JOINT Cuz My BASTARD BOY Made Me See that i Still LOVE YOU
HOLD ON MAN,
I

i can't find tha words to express how im really feeling ... Just Needed to write About it a Bit , 1

these lines are sick man ,, i really loved them , it's was all good you keep it simple , good emotions , rhymes were good too , but it was a little bit long, so flow was off a little bit , , and the way you write your pieces just annoyed me ,, but other than that , it's a good piece

[Embrace]

what is the caps lock on and off for? do you think we're stupid and can't see the multies? just wondering... but i liked it though, the caps just makes it a harder read.

[Solace]

what is the caps lock on and off for? do you think we're stupid and can't see the multies? just wondering... but i liked it though, the caps just makes it a harder read.

thats what we always say but he doesnt care.

[Embrace]

what is the caps lock on and off for? do you think we're stupid and can't see the multies? just wondering... but i liked it though, the caps just makes it a harder read.

thats what we always say but he doesnt care.

oh lol fair enough
it's more the ?? and the !! and the !?! that makes me
like he is screaming... i dunno lol.
nice piece though to be fair.
did she really say to your mates that she'd go on cam...?! HARSH!

[J Roc]

Yeah Sorry its just my style from another site , thats how we do it there n dont wanna get rusty with it ..

n Yeah She said that ^ lol , was crying about her a couple minutes ago ... Shit still hurts Thanks for the feed thoughh

[Solace]

And as much as I think your a cocky bastard i thought the piece was good

[J Roc]

Thanks Mann didn't really know how to express my feelings on this lol thanks though

[Ice_Scarred]

Dude this was pretty dope. A lot of inside rhyming (and multi's) and texture. I'm feelin it bro.