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a murder and a suicide

Postby yamahiney16 » Apr 5th, '09, 04:36

Fresh blood drips from his knife. He couldnt process what he did in his mind. but before him, lay the mangled body of his neighbor. for everyday she jogged past his house, and everyday she waved hi. his wife had suspisions of adultry. he knew he was faithful. and he didn't know how to show her that he was. as the days progressed, he began to have thoughts. thoughts to permamently remove his neighbor so he can live life with his wife. one day, she came over to talk. it scared him deeply, for fear his wife would enter and leave him. "james," his neighbor began, "i think im falling for you." He looked down at the food he was preparing and the knife that lie in his hand. "im sorry," he told, "but im maddly in love with my wife." she took a step closer, "then a kiss for the road." she ran to hm, but he couldnt move, the knife still in his hand. Their lips met. She kissed hm with passion, nd he kissed her back. he drew back, "i can't" he explained." he pulled back the knife and plunged it through her heart. removing the knife he sees th fresh blood that drips from his knife. he was confused on what he did. he enjoyed the kiss, and that was why he killed her. he as unfaithfull to his wife which scared him more. what if i do it again? what if i kiss another? he thought. he stared at the knife for a good ten minutes and made his decision. he took the knife and plunged it into his own chest, to rid himself of the guilt.
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Re: a murder and a suicide

Postby <Stiiccy> » Apr 5th, '09, 04:41

what the fuck?
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Re: a murder and a suicide

Postby yamahiney16 » Apr 5th, '09, 04:49

my bad...i sometimes i get carried away with my writing...was it too strong?
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Re: a murder and a suicide

Postby <Stiiccy> » Apr 5th, '09, 05:02

yamahiney16 wrote:my bad...i sometimes i get carried away with my writing...was it too strong?

fuck no bring some more of that shit lol
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Re: a murder and a suicide

Postby MsZ_RoCkEtTe » Apr 5th, '09, 05:06

yamahiney16 wrote:my bad...i sometimes i get carried away with my writing...was it too strong?



:y: :y: :y: :y: :y:

That was excellent ;)
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Re: a murder and a suicide

Postby yamahiney16 » Apr 5th, '09, 14:29

thnx guys!! :happy: :) :D
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Re: a murder and a suicide

Postby MsZ_RoCkEtTe » Apr 5th, '09, 14:58

Lol no problem :)
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Re: a murder and a suicide

Postby yamahiney16 » Apr 5th, '09, 15:31

you'll probably be seeing alot of sadistic stuff like that because i am sort of sadistic...lol
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Re: a murder and a suicide

Postby MsZ_RoCkEtTe » Apr 5th, '09, 15:35

It's cool...I feel like that sometimes too.
I just never write anything because people be trynna put me in therapy :tounge2:
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Re: a murder and a suicide

Postby yamahiney16 » Apr 5th, '09, 15:41

lol...i like these forums...normally i avoid ppl...but here, ppl don't even know who i am :b:
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Re: a murder and a suicide

Postby MsZ_RoCkEtTe » Apr 5th, '09, 15:45

I feel ya on that one lol :happy:
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Re: a murder and a suicide

Postby yamahiney16 » Apr 5th, '09, 15:48

:worship: i bow to that
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Re: a murder and a suicide

Postby MsZ_RoCkEtTe » Apr 5th, '09, 15:51

yamahiney16 wrote::worship: i bow to that

Lmaoo :shifty:
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