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Forget about it!!!

Postby Purple23Haze » Apr 5th, '09, 17:47

Forget about it! if I wanted to get rowdy rowdy
Your lights would be outed outed don't doubt it
Given brain clouds now in crowds they wowed
Cause I been something of prodigy
since God was a child...PUT you on dial
Pull your card like Five-O pull my file
Hold my rifle with a trifle like smile
Ready ta get wild smoke a green mile
While your idles take my pie yo
I piece of my psyche go freestyled
What you need is ta bleed from your tear ducks
what these fucks hear sucks
they only big out of sheer luck
My path in life stays steered drunk
Weird uh! My auto-pilot likes ta get fucked up
What up why yall punks front try stunt
And can't even get reef for your blunt, RUNT!

Duty calls is that a booty call
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Re: Forget about it!!!

Postby gutawafang » Apr 8th, '09, 22:19

I can't flow to this. It sounds very "camp cheer" to me. It's as if you are simply rhyming.
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Re: Forget about it!!!

Postby Purple23Haze » Apr 11th, '09, 22:34

whatever u have no idea! your a fuckin kid!
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Re: Forget about it!!!

Postby Solace » Apr 11th, '09, 22:38

This is your 11th year writing and your still wack as fuck :whistle:
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Re: Forget about it!!!

Postby Purple23Haze » Apr 11th, '09, 22:42

You don't know shit fool
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Re: Forget about it!!!

Postby Solace » Apr 11th, '09, 22:44

Yeah...Too bad I write better than you, and I've been doing it for 10 years less than you have :(
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Re: Forget about it!!!

Postby Purple23Haze » Apr 11th, '09, 22:46

Yea and you still don't know shit just talk it
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Re: Forget about it!!!

Postby Solace » Apr 11th, '09, 22:47

How am I shit talking.


I speak the truth.
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Re: Forget about it!!!

Postby Purple23Haze » Apr 11th, '09, 22:55

Your weak and foolish
you could profit from the truest
I make a prophet as the truth hits
I be ruthless poo bitch koothless
hillbilly toothless
for ri-really moulin rouge chick
You got one pussy and two dicks
Two ears and one mouth
Cause you need to listen twice as much you chatter about
Rip your ass out words put it back to your shout
And like that I'm a let it all out
Put you in the rarest form of a brain cloud
And still manage to myself be wowed
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Re: Forget about it!!!

Postby Solace » Apr 11th, '09, 22:55

That was horrible. :laughing:
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Re: Forget about it!!!

Postby Purple23Haze » Apr 11th, '09, 22:57

You're an idiot dude stop spamming now
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Re: Forget about it!!!

Postby Solace » Apr 12th, '09, 01:23

lol you're so easy to stomp on :flutter:

Fine; I'll stop spamming as long as your next posts have nothing to do with me.

Cause I'm always after the last words.
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Re: Forget about it!!!

Postby James R. » Apr 12th, '09, 01:40

Wow you still fucking suck
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Re: Forget about it!!!

Postby Solace » Apr 12th, '09, 01:55

James R. wrote:Wow you still fucking suck

Haha remember this shit

http://www.forum.trshady.com/viewtopic.php?f=24&t=54913

Purple Haze you dont want that to happen again do you? :flutter:
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Re: Forget about it!!!

Postby BuzzZ » Apr 13th, '09, 16:41

since God was a child...PUT you on dial
Pull your card like Five-O pull my file
Hold my rifle with a trifle like smile


not being offensive or nowt but what dose this mean ?

sounds to me like you've got gods number :worship:
you use a file as a gun ? :unsure:
and isnt a trifle something you eat ? :tounge2:
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