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old ass 16 that i refined

Postby <Stiiccy> » Apr 13th, '09, 21:41

u cant desrcibe my tunes, no less than an artform,
gave a mental patient a mic, where this spawned from,
psychologically crazy, from the inside out,
tryed to feed me meds, tore my fuckin enzymes out,
if you cant feel me, or understand my message,
lemma spell it out, for you faggots to catch this,
im here for the freaks, the ones left behind,
ones you made fun of, 6th grade in the lunch line,
goths and the emos, the dorks and the nerds,
ones who couldnt read, ones who couldnt say no words,
they got a place with me, and my hell thats on earth,
bringin all were worth, we condemed since birth,
generation x, we follow thy kurt,
teenage agnst, may our army submurge
attackin the suburbs, with all kinna verbs,
listen to thy words, sticcy leads you to the herbs,
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Re: old ass 16 that i refined

Postby Emadyville » Apr 13th, '09, 21:56

I really liked the message of this, I thought the content was great, the flow I got from it was a little messed up and the rhyming became boring at the end, but definitely not bad
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Re: old ass 16 that i refined

Postby <Stiiccy> » Apr 13th, '09, 21:59

Emadyville wrote:I really liked the message of this, I thought the content was great, the flow I got from it was a little messed up and the rhyming became boring at the end, but definitely not bad

thanks my man...hows college life btw?
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Re: old ass 16 that i refined

Postby BuzzZ » Apr 13th, '09, 22:37

that was really good, ryhming about the stuff thats happening in the world to day, nice1 dude :wave:
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Re: old ass 16 that i refined

Postby Emadyville » Apr 14th, '09, 01:48

<Stiiccy> wrote:
Emadyville wrote:I really liked the message of this, I thought the content was great, the flow I got from it was a little messed up and the rhyming became boring at the end, but definitely not bad

thanks my man...hows college life btw?


Going good, have been focusing way toooo much on my music then my school work haha but it's good, tryin to get done with this semester and shit so I can focus on recording more, I just did a bunch of shit over easter break tho, I put up a redone version of one song and 2 others should go up tonight.
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Re: old ass 16 that i refined

Postby <Stiiccy> » Apr 14th, '09, 02:06

Emadyville wrote:
<Stiiccy> wrote:
Emadyville wrote:I really liked the message of this, I thought the content was great, the flow I got from it was a little messed up and the rhyming became boring at the end, but definitely not bad

thanks my man...hows college life btw?


Going good, have been focusing way toooo much on my music then my school work haha but it's good, tryin to get done with this semester and shit so I can focus on recording more, I just did a bunch of shit over easter break tho, I put up a redone version of one song and 2 others should go up tonight.

oh shit tight tight
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