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How can I ReUp now!!!

Postby Purple23Haze » Apr 18th, '09, 01:24

It's the RE- just step we just left me could guess
Who he represents how you gonna have me out
When I dash stash the cash and lash out last bout
You ever seen trout I aint have been naw me..could lob them(purposeful two dots try to catch that flow)
“But we just saw them” yall say jaws dropped in awe and
Why yall appalled when I drop law man law of gravity
Your anatomy me bad and actually sad ta lead power pee
I'm learning who I am and you'll never know the distance
I race but never show burning the words plan in trail blazed
With wind blow!@ it and addicts never traffic cause they know they spaze acted
Never retracted I'm the baddest to have multiply and divide add subtracted
Crack heads never seen the chap stick work Maverick don't sell carmex that “JERK”!!!
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Re: How can I ReUp now!!!

Postby Purple23Haze » Apr 18th, '09, 01:48

I aint have been naw me..could lob them

Is this the line in which you refer pot head
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Re: How can I ReUp now!!!

Postby Solace » Apr 18th, '09, 01:50

Purple23Haze wrote:I aint have been naw me..could lob them

Is this the line in which you refer pot head

That made no sense at all :zipped:

Fix the structure; Im sure your not as shitty as you seem. Its just the structure makes shit look like its your first day writing you know. Like the most part of the structure is bad; not all.
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Re: How can I ReUp now!!!

Postby Purple23Haze » Apr 18th, '09, 01:53

Solace wrote:
Purple23Haze wrote:I aint have been naw me..could lob them

Is this the line in which you refer pot head

That made no sense at all :zipped:

Fix the structure; Im sure your not as shitty as you seem. Its just the structure makes shit look like its your first day writing you know. Like the most part of the structure is bad; not all.


UHN seroiusly should I do a audio for you guys or what are you serious no offense I do respect it but check it I'm gonna do an audio before my next writing post!
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Re: How can I ReUp now!!!

Postby Solace » Apr 18th, '09, 01:56

Purple23Haze wrote:
Solace wrote:
Purple23Haze wrote:I aint have been naw me..could lob them

Is this the line in which you refer pot head

That made no sense at all :zipped:

Fix the structure; Im sure your not as shitty as you seem. Its just the structure makes shit look like its your first day writing you know. Like the most part of the structure is bad; not all.


UHN seroiusly should I do a audio for you guys or what are you serious no offense I do respect it but check it I'm gonna do an audio before my next writing post!

Yeah do that; cause text you structure weird but your multies are wack I hope you know that. Not being disrespectful tho; hope you know that. Work on them too. But id like to hear some audio from you cause it'd be easier than decrypting your text.
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Re: How can I ReUp now!!!

Postby Purple23Haze » Apr 18th, '09, 02:03

"K" btw fuck you Coleon
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Re: How can I ReUp now!!!

Postby Solace » Apr 18th, '09, 02:06

Id love to see a PurpleHaze Coleon beef :laughing:
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Re: How can I ReUp now!!!

Postby Purple23Haze » Apr 18th, '09, 02:07

Solace wrote:Id love to see a PurpleHaze Coleon beef :laughing:


Do I smell a queef!! purple haze and coleon beef
Atleast leave before you could leaf
trees are springing when I chief
Smoke ya like the doja
oppose ya rolls royce ya
thru pure choice bruh
what you want like I can't ash a battle
Assume I react to rattle smash an asshole
lift you up with a back-o back hand a ho
This is how I handle the dismantled
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Re: How can I ReUp now!!!

Postby Solace » Apr 18th, '09, 02:08

Purple23Haze wrote:
Solace wrote:Id love to see a PurpleHaze Coleon beef :laughing:


Do I smell a queef!!

Clever.
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Re: How can I ReUp now!!!

Postby Solace » Apr 18th, '09, 02:12

Purple23Haze wrote:
Solace wrote:Id love to see a PurpleHaze Coleon beef :laughing:


Do I smell a queef!! purple haze and coleon beef
Atleast leave before you could leaf
trees are springing when I chief
Smoke ya like the doja
oppose ya rolls royce ya
thru pure choice bruh
what you want like I can't ash a battle
Assume I react to rattle smash an asshole
lift you up with a back-o back hand a ho
This is how I handle the dismantled

Good job, you edited your post with more wack stuff.

I've beaten you already which is the reason I don't try to provoke you to start another "e-beef" that I will win. I could beat you with 12 lines or so without trying and you know it. But keep trying, it keeps me amused.
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Re: How can I ReUp now!!!

Postby Purple23Haze » Apr 18th, '09, 02:16

Good cause you and them got pools of drool and then
I amused with friends not the internet inner gift
I can handle my own N i wasn't battling you holmes
Come get smacked in the dome go home like you and alone
jack it addict solace is flase shit I shift to the all is and all is me
Flawless it's simply appalling all yalls jaws dropped in awe uhn
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Re: How can I ReUp now!!!

Postby Solace » Apr 18th, '09, 02:18

Purple23Haze wrote:Good cause you and them got pools of drool and then
I amused with friends not the internet inner gift
I can handle my own N i wasn't battling you holmes
Come get smacked in the dome go home like you and alone
jack it addict solace is flase shit I shift to the all is and all is me
Flawless it's simply appalling all yalls jaws dropped in awe uhn

I really hope you didn't think that was close to being dope :zipped:

Lets just battle in Rap Battles. It's just dumb to clutter one Creative Writing section with disses; especially when me and Coleon destroy you and no one sees :whistle:
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Re: How can I ReUp now!!!

Postby Purple23Haze » Apr 18th, '09, 02:18

Coleon wrote:hell Solace I'll drop 6

Punches like J Roc, with them you stay shocked
Leave Purple Haze shakin like he was Michael J. Fox

I’m amazed ya’ll, like sunken treasure watch me bury chests
Coleon be at his very best, Am I sure? Positive like an A-Rod steroid test

I looked at your shit, half way man I just stopped reading
You’re shit is as unimportant to me as fuckin hockey season


WEAK!!! alrite solace
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Re: How can I ReUp now!!!

Postby Solace » Apr 18th, '09, 02:20

Shall I post the topic up or you?

12 lines. Either of us can go first but please don't take longer than 20 minutes :8)


@Coleon, lol no problem. I don't really like hockey either.
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Re: How can I ReUp now!!!

Postby Solace » Apr 18th, '09, 02:24

Hahaha whatever. You've had enough of sloppy seconds in your life im sure Coleon, time for someone else to take a turn :p
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