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Postby J_cuz » Apr 15th, '09, 23:06

[introductry words]leave them kids alone on the street, you hear me

[verse 1]As i stepped out off my front door, what did i see
another little kid on the street shottin weed
and at that youth might be
a kid thats sixteen with kids and a soon to be wifey
and it reminds me of me when i was his age
with 2 kids as i prayed,,,,, for the third
i got down on one knee to my bird
i gave her 3 words and she confermed
we was getting married,
man that was the best time of my life i was fucking happy
and then a mirical came another little baby in nappys
i was tested by god with his blessin that he gave me a family
there was suzie jhon and paul
and my misses clair she ruled us all
if we stepped out of line, like a gaurd dog on alert we'd get mauled
it was like a prison but i still stood tall

[hook x2]this is what ive been thro and what im seein today
kids at sixteen tryin ta get paid
because they got laid with another kid on the way
tryin ta make a livin and tryin ta get out the game
but they embarsset at they selfs because everyday they see the same shame
the same harrestment that put them there in the first plaace

[verse 2]every kid on the street has got a wifey
if some of em havent then they might of seen
god, he is still alive belive me
ive seen him myself whilst i was sleeping
he showed me the light and recreated my way of dreaming
as it seems i aint ready to fight, ive finally become clean
i used all my might, an i came through harder than a fuckin football team
of twelve or thirteen what ever it is
i was once dirrty people just used to take the fuckin piss
an now im gunna shove it back in there face and show em whos the realist
person around here
they made an enermy along time ago that they now fear
ive being doing this ever since i was a lil kid an its now clear
im goin to pounce this year make a album track and get it out there
keep pushing untill i pull out a gun an make em scared
but how can i do this to these kids that i compared
to me cuz i made it
but how can i look down on them like there fadin
there hatin cuz cops came round there place and started raidin
lookin for crack or anything to put them away with
just cuz there black thats blaintenly racist
the law these days isnt just justice it just wasted

[hook x2]this is what ive been thro and what im seein today
kids at sixteen tryin ta get paid
because they got laid with another kid on the way
tryin ta make a livin and tryin ta get out the game
but they embarsset at they selfs because everyday they see the same shame
the same harrestment that put them there in the first plaace

[outroductry words] i guess my life aint been that brilliant has it ha ha but if i made it out anyone can

COMMENTS PLEASE!!!
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Re: Wifey

Postby cityfan31 » Apr 15th, '09, 23:22

well....i'd like to hear u rap that..might be interesting. is it supposed to not rhyme?
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Re: Wifey

Postby J_cuz » Apr 17th, '09, 03:46

of corse i can rap it lol, i wrote it, and it dose rhyme u ideot, what you speak in giberish cuz i carnt write in giberish lol,
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Re: Wifey

Postby J_cuz » Apr 17th, '09, 04:25

ill tell u what, once ive made a beat then i put em both together on a track and post in on ere, den youll c that they rhyme

its not how your readin it, its how it comes out when rapin it, it isnt all at one pace u no, theres some fast bits init and some slow bits
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Re: Wifey

Postby BILI » Apr 18th, '09, 12:49

wtf thats whack homie,even I can write better then that!
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Re: Wifey

Postby J_cuz » Apr 18th, '09, 15:55

[verse 1]As i stepped out off my front door, what did i *see*
another little kid on the street shottin *weed*
and at that youth *might be*
a kid thats sixteen with kids and a soon to be *wifey*
and it reminds me of me when i was his *age*
with 2 kids as i *prayed*,,,,, for the *third*
i got down on one knee to my *bird*
i gave her 3 *words* and she *confermed*
we was getting *married,*
man that was the best time of my life i was fucking *happy*
and then a mirical came another little baby in *nappys*
i was tested by god with his blessin that he gave me a *family* <(fam-i-ly)
there was suzie jhon and *paul*
and my misses clair she ruled us *all*
if we stepped out of line, like a gaurd dog on alert we'd get *mauled*
it was like a prison but i still stood *tall*

[hook x2]this is what ive been thro and what im seein *today*<todayyy - (runs on for 2 seconds)
kids at sixteen tryin ta get *paid*
because they got laid with another kid on the *way*
tryin ta make a livin and tryin ta get out the *game*<gaaame- (make the a stand out a bit)
but they embarsset at they selfs because everyday they see the same *shame*
the same harrestment that put them there in the first *plaace*

[verse 2]every kid on the street has got a *wifey*
if some of em havent then they *might of seen*
god, he is still alive *belive me*
ive seen him myself whilst i was *sleeping*
he showed me the light and recreated my way of *dreaming*
as it seems i aint ready to *fight*, ive finally become *clean*
i used all my *might*, an i came through harder than a fuckin football *team*
of twelve or *thirteen* what ever it *is*
i was once dirrty people just used to take the fuckin *piss*
an now im gunna shove it back in there face and show em whos the *realist*
person *around here*
they made an enermy along time ago that they *now fear*
ive being doing this ever since i was a lil kid an its *now clear*
im goin to pounce this *year* make a album track and get it out *there*
keep pushing untill i pull out a gun an make em *scared* <scarrrred -(let the errrrd part run on for abit)
but how can i do this to these kids that i *compared*
to me cuz i *made it*
but how can i look down on them like there *fadin*
there hatin cuz cops came round there place and started *raidin*< as in a raid that police do
lookin for *crack* or anything to put them *away with*
just cuz there *black* thats blaintenly *racist*
the law these days isnt just justice it just *wasted*

[hook x2]this is what ive been thro and what im seein *today*<todayyy - (runs on for 2 seconds)
kids at sixteen tryin ta get *paid*
because they got laid with another kid on the *way*
tryin ta make a livin and tryin ta get out the *game*<gaaame- (make the a stand out a bit)
but they embarsset at they selfs because everyday they see the same *shame*
the same harrestment that put them there in the first *plaace*

now if you carnt understand it now then u must be dumb

ive high lighted all the rhyming words
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Re: Wifey

Postby BILI » Apr 18th, '09, 16:04

I still dont understand. :(
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Re: Wifey

Postby J_cuz » Apr 18th, '09, 16:17

lol read each word(s) line for line then ull understand, yea it is complected ryhme but it dose rhyme
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