Dammit

[gutawafang]

silence like treasure, consumed for pleasure
luxurious pressure, peers zero leisure
glorious lectures, mistaken textures
perfect conjecture, a thought that fractures

in fragments, staring at different segments
all the statements spill over in reenactments
waking the lawyers with the court hammers
earthquaking this rhyme with retard grammars

explosive violence, volatile smiles
unstable silence, spastic keystyles
inspiring vocabulary, from the dictionary
to describe february and play pictionary

untitled feelings, undescribed, can't be typed
awkward banners, spontaneous tears can't be wiped
can't be swiped, bleeding hearts to be displayed
through broken glass, hands will reach for the bait

[Drama Setter]

not bad , try add some variety and better meanings . longer sentences better .

[gutawafang]

Thank you so much Elmo!!!

[neversnooze]

the flow and multies are almost excellent. like drama said, work on your meaning thats also important in writing. without meaning its just random rhyming.

7/10 nice work

[gutawafang]

Actually there's meaning to it. It's because I hate the class I am in currently in school. It's like this.

silence like treasure, consumed for pleasure:
It means that the class likes to be quiet. Likes to talk among themselves and enjoy talking among themselves.

luxurious pressure, peers zero leisure:
I seem to like this class cuz they made me rhyme. And yeah, zero leisure. I have yet to feel like we're classmates. None localized them.

glorious lectures, mistaken textures:
Ryan Qing(my lecturer) gives good lectures. I like the way he teaches and the way he speaks. Mistaken textures is when the com hangs as we apply textures on maya. And it also refers to his china accent.

perfect conjecture, a thought that fractures:
Still crazy. Mixed up thoughts.

in fragments, staring at different segments:
What to do? It's like a puzzle.

all the statements spill over in reenactments:
Sometimes I don't feel like telling the truth

waking the lawyers with the court hammers:
Don't judge me yet. You ain't know who I am.

earthquaking this rhyme with retard grammars:
It's just that I hate this.

explosive violence, volatile smiles:
I put on fake smiles and give my fake laughs.

unstable silence, spastic keystyles:
It's too quiet. The words in my head speak louder than 05.

inspiring vocabulary, from the dictionary:
To tell you that I used dictionary to make this.

to describe february and play pictionary:
I prefer the past where everyone knows Fish.

untitled feelings, undescribed, can't be typed:
Yeah. Literally.

awkward banners, spontaneous tears can't be wiped:
Signals that throw me off and I hate this.

can't be swiped, bleeding hearts to be displayed:
Do I continue to be like this?

through broken glass, hands will reach for the bait:
I hope there will be icebreaking games.

[neversnooze]

Actually there's meaning to it. It's because I hate the class I am in currently in school. It's like this.

silence like treasure, consumed for pleasure:
It means that the class likes to be quiet. Likes to talk among themselves and enjoy talking among themselves.

luxurious pressure, peers zero leisure:
I seem to like this class cuz they made me rhyme. And yeah, zero leisure. I have yet to feel like we're classmates. None localized them.

glorious lectures, mistaken textures:
Ryan Qing(my lecturer) gives good lectures. I like the way he teaches and the way he speaks. Mistaken textures is when the com hangs as we apply textures on maya. And it also refers to his china accent.

perfect conjecture, a thought that fractures:
Still crazy. Mixed up thoughts.

in fragments, staring at different segments:
What to do? It's like a puzzle.

all the statements spill over in reenactments:
Sometimes I don't feel like telling the truth

waking the lawyers with the court hammers:
Don't judge me yet. You ain't know who I am.

earthquaking this rhyme with retard grammars:
It's just that I hate this.

explosive violence, volatile smiles:
I put on fake smiles and give my fake laughs.

unstable silence, spastic keystyles:
It's too quiet. The words in my head speak louder than 05.

inspiring vocabulary, from the dictionary:
To tell you that I used dictionary to make this.

to describe february and play pictionary:
I prefer the past where everyone knows Fish.

untitled feelings, undescribed, can't be typed:
Yeah. Literally.

awkward banners, spontaneous tears can't be wiped:
Signals that throw me off and I hate this.

can't be swiped, bleeding hearts to be displayed:
Do I continue to be like this?

through broken glass, hands will reach for the bait:
I hope there will be icebreaking games.

i couldnt have guessed^ but ok

[gutawafang]

LOL. Thank you for reading man.

Cuz you know, it takes time to analyze a poem. I took an hour to analyze my OWN poem. LOL.

[neversnooze]

LOL. Thank you for reading man.

Cuz you know, it takes time to analyze a poem. I took an hour to analyze my OWN poem. LOL.

lmao

[gutawafang]

HAHA. Really thanks for reading man.