It’s On

[mcZu]

Verse without chorus or bridge; if this ever gets recorded (which will happen if I step up my quality), I'll probably add an intro or something. Feedback is always appreciated; especially constructive feed.

Emcee Zu - It’s On
(Beat/instrumental - http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Bt0QdL8AGCk )

Across a cross there usually lies such a ground;
Impounded by lust; been chasing my dreams like a hound,
Fist to mouths; when you offend my inner-‘wow’
Like pride, they try to fuck with my version of style
Like a religious bride; I relinquish the fake resemblance
Because it’s crystal clear; no one like me can appear
Nor be down with a load of lyrics like peer to peer,
Disappear; reappear, I diss a queer and degrade years
To seven days; opposite of stronger misplaced
In my anatomy of great-ness; graced with opposite of hate,
Lust, Obsession, Vain and Envy; sum up human fate.
Must a recording session name any release date?
Or is music timeless when you end the recording phase?
Questions have a quest to be anxious when asked in fractions;
So I mass up and bash the answerer with a fast punch-line
That lands the question mark of my superior mind out of mind
So don’t mind at all to analyze my rhymes; which define
Thee signs of rap; I am humble when I brag, never stumble on tracks
Dump you on lyrical facts; or should it be vice versa?
Dropping hip hop on a track with vicious verses, a…
…Microphone with a Microsoft running comp at home.
One sock as pop filter a clean one of course. A wave roams
With sound through my room; my mind has a Pop filter
Keeping it real; I mean hip hop should be ill, stop fillers
Still healthy when I steal a verse on a featured song, see…
I keep my irises airing out my ancestors glare, precious flair
Not obnoxious when I stare; more curmudgeon like air
My aura cures curses with soil less mud on it; I could swear.
But I won’t; almost summer, we’re off spring; like an heir
My name Zouhair means bright in every aspect; so I declare,
An artistic war like Sun Tzu. You be invisible in my court like Sue,
If lyrical is mentioned, you ought to hear my name; Emcee Zu.

[threeandtwenty]

it gets confusing when you start sentences off at the middle of a line and then rhyme the middle of the sentence without finishing the idea...not saying its wrong,but i think it'd make a better punchline if you end the concept on the snare beat.

My name Zouhair means bright in every aspect;
so I declare,fight and get your ass-kicked

[or something like that,just a random example lol]