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My Special Girl

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My Special Girl

Postby shadyallday » May 4th, '09, 19:13

this is my love song lol what u think...


I remember the first time i saw u, i was like ur gorgeous can i get ur naumber so i can call u?,
i was like i loved ur sexy walk and u giggled, can we chill somewhere and just chat a little,
baby i love this, just talking and walking with u, u told me about the bad relationships u been thru,
ur with me now girl i'll give u all the support i can boo, i was nothing before i met u,
remember our first date, we saw a movie got some food and went back to ur place,
u gave me a little kiss on the cheek, i got u a gift cause i was missing u all week,
ur different than all the other chicks i meet, u always wanna model some lingerie for me,
u go into the bedreoom, i cant wait to see what u got for me,baby i love ur honesty, u just come out and say what u want cause i know u wantin me, u tell me to cover my eyes, cause u dont want me to see, what u got in store for me, i take a peek and u start taking the clothes off of me,
waiting for me to react but im reacting normally, i gotta act accordingly, i go to move my hands and ur like wait til i count to 3, 1-2-3, i open my eyes and ur like u like what u see?, of course baby ur gorgeous i love the gift but ur love just means more to me,
u got rose petals all over the bed/ u got the candles lit, girl im loving the scent, we sit on the bed and i look in ur eyes, and i see u looking in mine, ur so good looking and fine, right now im looking for a sign, that we're meant to be and we're soul mates but i dont gotta look a long time,
this is what i call fate, i knew u were the one before our stroll on our first date,
u were always there when i need u, its me and u forever, ur unbeleivable,
u help me express what im feelin, u helped me to deal with, my doubt, but our love is strong i feel it,
ur the best thing that ever happened to me, actually, im glad that i happened to be, walking by and i saw u start to glance at me, just think if i decided to walk by, if i decided not to stop, not to say hi,
not to look, just go on with my own life, i woulda never met the hottest chick that ever caught my eye,
id be at home lookin at some porn site, getting mad for not talking to u, but its all right, we met and i call u and we wind up talking all night, i'll never stop loving u, ur always the first person im gonna be running to, ur special, ur wonderful, anything u want its nothing boo, i always dreamt of meeting a girl like u, im happy the dream is finally coming true...i love u.

so what do u think...
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Re: My Special Girl

Postby it wasn't me » May 5th, '09, 01:10

quite good actually, you need to tidy it up tho, so it looks like a song, not an essay. good lyrics though :flower:
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