**SINGLE** C-Riz-Fastlane

[°[~CHR!$~]°]

yep once again i hit TR with another track....this time i plan a full mixtape...to be out end of this year...but to give a little idea... enough talk...
cover,tracklist soon to be announced
enough talk there ya go

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[Slim Zaddy]

i like the intro , it's sick man ,, wish i 'm on ya level ,, lyrics and rhymes are great ,, i liked the beat ,, and the way you flow over it ,, flow is sick so your delivery ,, they way you start ur second verse is insane ,, loved it man, actually it's the best i hve heard from ya so far ,, but one thing is that your verses are short ,, i didn’t like the way you start the 3rd verse but the way you end it is dope ,, over all it's a dope track ,, 8.5/10 ,, keep it up bro

[°[~CHR!$~]°]

thx zaddy

[°[~CHR!$~]°]

uuhhh okay sorry killa...

[threeandtwenty]

finally,a criz song
hook was only ok,not feeling the made men part...otherwise it was good.liked the way you rhymed breath and fast in the second verse.outro bit was done well,and the way you switched flows was cool too.i think it would've made the track better if you were a little more aggressive lyrically for this beat.delivery was good,as expected.

[°[~CHR!$~]°]

good lookin out haha..thx man
guess i gotta work on my hooks then ahah

[_Ironic_]

yo my man, peepin this...let's see how u took my advice.



you did it man...what the fuck U GOT SWAG NOW. I can hear it, and your ability to ride the beat is MUCH nicer.. "ps that swag line in that scheme was the best use of overlays on this track" like if you could keep that level of overlays throughout this track would be solid...your chorus is hot, fuck what these other dudes are sayin, you got the ride idea...just need to work on the timing of the overlays cuz sometimes they were off...U wanna try to match it as CLOSE as possible...like if u feel like ur lagged u should just keep doin it...eventually you'll get it. but yeah man..this was a huge improvement over ur other tracks man. the only other real criticism i can find in here was pronunciation...try to enunciate your words clearly and articulate them...like a piece of art..cuz just some of the lyrics I didn't understand with your accent...keep at it bro!

[randomghost]

sounds like a T.I song beat is awsome lyrics is good...but i cant feel ur flow and delivery make it more powerful and energitic...mmm...hook is hot i like it ...keep them comin man...cheers

[°[~CHR!$~]°]

propz you both appreciate it....
104views and 5reviews c'mon : )

[°[~CHR!$~]°]

uppin'

[_Ironic_]

[Xray]

Chorus is kind of catchy, beat isn't my cup of tea. Vocals on the verses are low, need to turn it up a little, cause the beat keeps switching up and more instruments come in, and your voice fades out. Your overlays are out of place most of the time, and because you choose to keep them loud I can tell there out of place easily. You gotta spend more time fixing the timing of your overlays, your flow is good, and the delivery could be better. I felt this song was rushed, could have been better if you recorded this once or twice more, just to perfect it and avoid feedback like this. Keep doing what you do man, the effects you use on ur vocals are dope so keep doing that. Beat choice, I think you need to switch it up a little, use some 90's sounding beats, never heard you on a old school beat.

[°[~CHR!$~]°]

lol thanks ronic and propz sajjad for your honesty

[°[~CHR!$~]°]

up up

[Enimee]

that shit was on point, it was simple at times nothing too complex but still somethin to bump ya know? def not a deep track but it was sick none the less delivery was on point and the rhyme scheme fit the feel of the beat you did good work with the hook like i said simple and to the point i liked it alot nice upbeat tone to it keep this shit up good work c-riz