SLMacDougall vs J Roc (VOTE NOW)

[J Roc]

MAC A RAPPER? u Piece-of-shit if u "See-a-win" it's cause u taking ACID TABLETS!!!!
in FACT U WACK, JERK! Lets-check , i'll Let-Techs "X-S" Like i HAVE YOUR PASSWORD!!(Access)
RAP? U?CLAPS BLEW if im mad-at-this-kid theyll come "After-the-bitch" like Pedos in CHATROOMS
u wana see the CHAMP LOSE? on a Fast-Pace i'll get "Mac-Ate" like FAT DUDES With FAST FOOD!
Want the FLOW THAT I GOT so ur Hot-as-J? "Wanna-Hang"? Get Some ROPE THATS TIED , DAWG!!
Save Embarrassment? GO & SIGN OFF Before i "Stop-Mac" like i BROKE MY IPOD!!!
ur in CHARGE OF UR FATE so ur Rippin-yaself i'll "Give-u-an-L" like the second PART OF YA NAME!!!
ur BARS IS ALL MADE With Diabetes Cause your "Pen is illen" Without MARKING THE PAGE!!!
..... ..... by the way , it's light work lol
EFF YOUR BARS Your the N-a-to the S-I-R? ..Na(h)-Sir! so u musta been ESCABAR!!! lol.....
REST REGARD That My Gat's-out &'ll knock "Macs-Out" Like CREDIT CARDS!!!
Say ur TECHS IS LARGE Sighting-at-me?? Minus-The-V And Not Even In SEX YOU "HARD"!!!
These are just EXTRA BARS Cause Those-Guns? i know u don't "Hold-Em" Like TEXAS (CARDS)!
I'll see your BACK TWISTING Then Aim-it-There And "Break-the-chair" like FAT BITCHES!!!
In RAP SHIZZET u WACK DIPSHIT! Not Close-to-call cause i'm "Over-all" Like my STATISTICS!!!
Whoa! POSSIBLY HIM ?? u the Dumb-Type to come to a Gun-Fight ARMED WITH A STICK
he gave a LOSS TO A KID?? Only time "Mac With The Future" Is Cause "KARMAS A BITCH"!!
If you don't get it , Fuck you lol

[J Roc]

"Your the N-a-to the S-I-R? ..Na(h)-Sir! so u musta been ESCABAR!!!"
Lmao .... Are You Nasir? Nah Sir!! ... Blah Blah Blah ... lol played off Nas's line saying ur not a great [?[ ... just so ya know lol

i'm the writer that you haven't found, punchline king .. ?
i'm sorry to inform you nikka, but there's NO SUCH THING .. !!


Lmao @ That Duke .... Nice Shit . Vote's come on

[J Roc]

lol Thanks Douggy

[James R.]

This was actually a really good battle. J Roc had a lot of punches and nameplay on the MAC thing, but Scotty actually got some personals in there. I'll have to give it to J though cuz the rhyming was better and the punches were better despite the lack of personals.

J though you had NO structure and a very difficult flow to follow. Work on that.

[MC Anonymous]

Scotty gets my vote. In a battle in text there has to be three main things, flow, rhymes, and structure.
Scott had flow/structure and rhymes, and J Roc only had rhymes.
So Scott for my vote.

[SajN]

Gotta give my vote to Maccy.
The way Roc structured his makes me just confused lol.
Easier to read, understand and flow to

[J Roc]

2-2 ...Guess it's first to 5

[Slim Zaddy]

MacDougall was tough on this one ,, but j roc , had sick punshlines and dissing lines ,, and MacDougall had a better flow and structured , but my vote gotta go to j roc ,, but work on the structure dude .. really ,, it's hard to read ,, ,,anyway good battle from both of y a

[J Roc]

Uppin , 3-2

[gutawafang]

Flow and structure would be MacDougall. Pretty clean. J Roc, your caps emphasize on your multis, which is quite good. But your structure can be improved A LOT. Multis and rhymes, J Roc's better. Macdougall did a nice flip by commenting on J Roc's CAPITALS, which is cool.

I'ma vote for J Roc. The whole shit's hot by the way.

[gutawafang]

Chill man, it's a cool battle anyways. You dropped well.