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James R. vs Coleon [James R. Wins]

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James R. vs Coleon [James R. Wins]

Postby James R. » Jul 14th, '09, 17:26

So for some reason the other topic was locked. Not sure why, maybe someone clicked the wrong button or smtn, but yeah here it is again

Coleon wrote:house rules, first to 5, 3 hit KO

This Bad Boy hasn't got Shyne, and Aftermath he won't have Game
like Hamilton he hasn't got Rhyme, so like Death Row all he's got's a name
he's not James, R, not by far, he's just JR.
oxymoron, old fart has used a rock for a computer
bring it to ya, this forum's self proclaimed main speaker
to your rap I'm Crooked I, cause I'll slay every feature
sprayin to this geezer, get your own style I mean it brutha
all you do is bite J/Jay like the crib was outa peanut butter

*the first 2 lines are easy for me but to break it down, Bad Boy records lost Shyne, Aftermath dropped The Game, Hamilton hasn't "got" or responded to Rhymefest's diss, and Death Row hasn't dropped stuff in forever


James R. wrote:You’re all heart broke cuz you’re bitch left, givin you hell
She my fan cuz my shit bumps like it’s written in brail
Coleon don’t act like you’re gonna flip on me reckless
Fuck a threat bitch you’re just anonymous sloppy seconds
You only proved that you’re whack with all of that narrative
Your verse just fell apart like your mom and dad’s marriage is
Your concepts are garbage dawg it’s time to disperse
Shit you admitted I inspired the hottest rhyme in your verse

Not too hard. 1st 2 lines are poking fun at him and his gf breaking up (which he said they might be in the original post of this thread). 4th bar's about him battling Anon. 6th I think his parents are divorced lol. I dunno he talks about being at his mom's house so I just assumed. Last bar is about him saying he liked my cobra clutch line in my Spyder battle so much he used the cobra clutch concept in his collab with Spyder


VOTE MOTHER FUCKERS!


classthe_king voted for me, and gutuwafang voted Coleon

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Re: James R. vs Coleon

Postby Spyder » Jul 14th, '09, 19:07

hahhaha i member that cobra cluth line :shifty:
i gotta go with James though, his had great flow and more personal punches :y:
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Re: James R. vs Coleon

Postby James R. » Jul 14th, '09, 19:31

Thanks for the vote

I'm up 2-1

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Re: James R. vs Coleon

Postby Drama Setter » Jul 14th, '09, 19:39

I voted for Cloeon too , James No cheat :shifty:
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Re: James R. vs Coleon

Postby James R. » Jul 14th, '09, 19:44

Oh shit my bad. Didn't see your vote holmes.

It's TIED 2-2

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Re: James R. vs Coleon

Postby BILI » Jul 15th, '09, 02:34

My vote to James R...It kinda really flows good to me
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Re: James R. vs Coleon

Postby gutawafang » Jul 15th, '09, 02:54

I voted for Coleon. :y:
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Re: James R. vs Coleon

Postby <Stiiccy> » Jul 15th, '09, 03:37

Holy fucking shit James just ripped a fuckin new one on you Coleon...No hate, but this was a slautering

James wins by a mile
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Re: James R. vs Coleon

Postby mcZu » Jul 15th, '09, 10:06

FLOW James
MULTIES Coleon (he had a tad more)
PERSONALS James
PUNCHLINES James
NAMEPLAY TIE
WORDPLAY Coleon

James 4-3

So my vote goes to James, it's a battle, and in a battle your supposed to attack your opponent with as much dirt as you can get. That's exactly what James did, so sorry Coleon, it was close.
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Re: James R. vs Coleon

Postby Steve Spag » Jul 15th, '09, 10:12

James gets my vote. Extremely dope drop my man, punchlines were fresh, flow was incredible, vocab. was above average as usual....just great stuff!
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Re: James R. vs Coleon

Postby James R. » Jul 15th, '09, 18:15

Another notch in the win column for James R :smoking:

Coleon real shit man you've stepped your game up battle after battle, and remembering where you started in creative writing I gotta say I'm mad proud of you bro. Thanks for a great ass battle, homie.
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