le tunisien vs. james r (James won)

[Le Tunisien]

prick ur a bit pitiful,i say the shit literal,my words are lyrical
it aint a miracle,but im a fkn Criminal...oh
He claims to have a life,he blames who has a Wife
actin gangsta with a knife,sanctum,he killed five!
"heeeeey guys,i am real nice,i raped my mom twice, i look like o trice,"
shit that so vice,but listen my advice,disapprove lessus christ,ur a package without a price
im really prayin james,just stop slayin lames,must stop layin dames
am i playin flames,just by sayin names,james or R its the fkn same
gleeful in ur pre school,ur Ego aint legal,i murder like an eagle
dont even act like cool,u just cant fight Fool,?! u fkn gettin smacked dude...

[Le Tunisien]

ok i admit that was pretty good

but dissing James is not in ur best interests

its a battle , waitin his response not a diss actually

[Solace]

It was average...You've gotten better but still not that good keep at it though.

[Le Tunisien]

It was average...You've gotten better but still not that good keep at it though.

it was Averageeee,damn i cant manageeeeeee

[Le Tunisien]

next time don't just post here, do a callout first

But I'll leave this open this one time

but sajn might close it

no need to call out, im sure he will answer cuz he says hes the best

[Solace]

It was average...You've gotten better but still not that good keep at it though.

it was Averageeee,damn i cant manageeeeeee

I can explain more. Eg your first two lines:

prick ur a bit pitiful,i say the shit literal,my words are lyrical
it aint a miracle,but im a fkn Criminal...oh

1. You called him pitiful, not much of a diss, nothing clever
2. Your literal. Thats great.
3. Your words are lyrics, oh thats good to hear.
4. It ain't a miracle...Whats not a miracle?
5. Your a 'fkn' criminal. Thats...great

Battles dont up yourself you lower the enemy. Then the rest was dumb trying to use many inner rhymes to be good. Overall = eh average maybe even below.

[Le Tunisien]

It was average...You've gotten better but still not that good keep at it though.

it was Averageeee,damn i cant manageeeeeee

I can explain more. Eg your first two lines:

prick ur a bit pitiful,i say the shit literal,my words are lyrical
it aint a miracle,but im a fkn Criminal...oh

1. You called him pitiful, not much of a diss, nothing clever
2. Your literal. Thats great.
3. Your words are lyrics, oh thats good to hear.
4. It ain't a miracle...Whats not a miracle?
5. Your a 'fkn' criminal. Thats...great

Battles dont up yourself you lower the enemy. Then the rest was dumb trying to use many inner rhymes to be good. Overall = eh average maybe even below.

i see, ok wats ur fav line?

[Solace]

shit that so vice,but listen my advice,disapprove lessus christ,ur a package without a price

Best line imo

[Spyder]

ahh look whos back, i agree with Solace on all his points man u gottin better but u need like a topic to play off of, like substance un ur battles

[James R.]

lmfao wow ok i'll just key some shit up and destroy your fag ass real quick

You came at me on wrong terms I'll leave you no face bith
Today's gonna be the day I throw it back like Oasis
You shit talkin to james cuz you see the flow that he had
You're nothin to me you're about as dope as rehab
Too bad your shit aint copped or bitten, it's sloppily written
You with a new flow is like a fuckin gilopi with spinners
Or tryin to put a bunch of sugar on shit, it's all a facade
You're a faggot one pic with bitches is all that we saw
And it's a metaphor for fail, all unfocused and blurred
I bet their vision was doubled and their spoken was slurred
I'm dope as you heard, eyes open just like CBS
I bring it to you live and direct like a TV set

To quote my homie J Roc liiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiight work (oh yeah he said it!)

[gutawafang]

That was quite a fast and simple one, James. And tunisien, I've read that before.

[classthe_king]

Haha, I don't know if were suppossed to vote on this...but yeah James slaughtered you dude.

[Spyder]

J-J-J-J-James

[JMG]

lol this wasnt fair