Solace wrote:Look at this little prick, didn't I destroy you in the previous months?
Learn how to spell "fucking" for once, ain't you just a devious cunt?
Won't stop bitching, I know inside that you wish you lyrically top me,
Try to stop me, with ya lyrics in the trash, just where your cock be,
Posting these pictures of yourself, trying to take over Scott's position,
I'm ripping into this midget, with a verbal knives and lyrical incisions,
I bear a burden because I think that I've said enough to murder you,
You're more anonymous than Angel cause not even one has heard of you.
Decent verse. I liked the rhyming though I think it fell off after the 2 lines though. I like that you touched on some semi personal punches like the pics, but the play him not bein able to spell fuck like a normal human could have been much more creative.
le tunisien wrote:Oh Pig,Look at your Sig,is that a trick,if ur Watchin Ass All Day???
enjoyin cyber Lay?made ur pussy Play??imma make Your Ass-Hole Pay!!!
in a better way,Sway,with Jay,yay!! stay away u fkn Trash Hoe May
Sit Around,with a brown clown,2 times your pound,that knocks you Down
pounce u in a Town,bounce u on the ground,ull sound like Shocked Noun
u fkn Irish Hound,imma get crowned,in the 1st round,u be Locked,Drown
cuz in this battle,imma confuse ya,Shit Barely Stattle,u a born Looser
u cant get a medal,cuz i produced ya,with cums,like ur Bone-Choosed-to
Weak verse. The rhyming in Solace's first 2 lines was better than the rhyming in this whole verse. I don't any multies pas the 2nd and 3rd lines and the last 2 lines don't even rhyme. And it's LOSER not LOOSER. LOOSER would suggest that something is less tight than something else. Anyways it was painfully basic and it didn't seem as though you put any real time or thought into this.
This battle was real weak. Solace you should have buried that garbage verse in 6 lines or less. I still think Solace took this because his verse was mechanically better. I didn't really enjoy either verse to be honest. Neither had amazing punches, but at least Solace attempted to get personal.
FLOW- Solace
STRUCTURE- Solace
PUNCHES- Solace
MULTIES- Solace (since Le Tuna only had like one)
RHYMES- Solace (since Le Tuna's last 2 lines didn't even rhyme)
VOCAB- Neither
COMPLEXITY- Neither
NAMEPLAY- Neither (who played on the other's name?)
OTHER- Neither