Rip At A Young Age (Quick 16)

[Solace]

Solace, merciless, hurting bliss, happy or angry, either way I'll murder this,
Burned and stitched, got words that itch while I got the birds to flip,
Got too much stress like a burdened bitch, have you heard this shit,
Words that get twisted so they end being simple words that rip,
Into the mental frame, ripping into the picture, yes this shit's a game,
Literally, I'll lift the framed, I'll hit the shamed, same time I'll crip the main,
-stream audience, got Jigsaw applauding this, looks like a got this gift,
That god had to give, spitting this rotten shit while rapping flawless shit,
Try to stop my streak, without a rockin' beat, I easily top the street,
Ain't lawfully dropping these lyrics, I'd like to see you try to come stopping me,
Stomping sheets of paper, old rhymes in the old times for younger minds,
Hunger binds mind and pencil, writing utensils that have stung and shined,
Committing younger crimes, no looking back, never looking trapped,
This ain't a rookie act, try to book me cat and end up looking wack,
Savagely I'm rapidly ravaging these raps that seem crap to me,
Honesty is what I'm good at, let's see how far you get attacking me.

5 min or so.

[gutawafang]

A keystyle is it? It's good man, knowing it's 5 mins worth of effort.

[Fa-Q]

dude those first two lines were gold man....rest was good too....i kinda want a quick three verses now...

[classthe_king]

Dope The multi's were crazy even though you weren't saying anything important. lol. Impressive for 5 min. Dope Shit.

[Requiem]

pretty good man. the flow is really good, multis are there. could've been more tho.
not bad for a quick 16.

Savagely I'm rapidly ravaging these raps that seem crap to me,
Honesty is what I'm good at, let's see how far you get attacking me.

great lines

[James R.]

Dope. As. Fuck. Anon showed me two lines and I thought it was his. That says a fucking lot dude. Good job man. You stepped shit the fuck UP

[Solace]

Thanks guys. So many positive comments lol Glad you all think I'm improving.

[Spyder]

i thot that was dope man, looked liked u took some time on it but it was a keystyle so that is crazy good job bro

[Solace]

Thanks bro

[mcZu]

That's what I'm talking about, way better than that battle verse against Le Tunisien.

I still got hope for you

Naah, I didn't think you was fallin off, dude. You just had a bad verse, everybody has 'em

[Solace]

Thank you McZu

Scott, no i wasnt lying you can ask MC Anonymous cause I was typing it up while talking to him on MSN. Bliss is like a lot of happiness. Hurting happiness. Thanks too.

[Solace]

Thats great to hear.

[Emadyville]

DOPE

nuff said, that was nasty

[Cookzee]

shit solace, and i thought i was good, that blew my ass out the water homes lol, keep it up, im inspired

[Solace]

DOPE

nuff said, that was nasty

Thanks Emady

And you remember the days where I was like "im going to rhyme, all the time, blow your mind"

shit solace, and i thought i was good, that blew my ass out the water homes lol, keep it up, im inspired

Thanks dude! Glad I could inspire someone