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1000 Degrees Celcius

Postby MC Anonymous » Aug 6th, '09, 02:39

Lyrically I'm on top, you can't see me, bombs drop
see me at the pawn shop I'm pawnin' ya mom's watch
More cash then stashes, see me with the lashes
1000 degrees celcius matches, catch this
more rockets then megatron with megabombs
let the bong get your wrong, now you singin' all my songs
bitch victora, here's the secret, son will be victorious
never spittin boring shit, tournin stages with frozen wrists
rocks glowin', emralds is nuclear kyrptonite
spittin, ripping right, eating eyes my mouth is drippin sight
mouth mechanical, my spit be soundin' like them high hats
even my voice blends, to fry caps just like that
Lyricist, materialist, going to spit the illist shit
put you in a headlock, kill you kid, don't wanna mess with the kill bill shit
intoxication boxing nations, glock be blazin at asians
to fry they pussies and they eat it, now they like all the tastin
bipolar polarised polar cap spittin all the raps
rippin all the tracks, medula iceoglada must relax
before the brain malfunction stops the movements from my only back
and I can't write with wrist movements, I'll be a loser that is wack

1000 Degrees...Celcius

I write inside my head so all of my lines is pre-written
be spittin the realist lyrical visions so you listin
I'm 1000 degrees hot, your not? Your dropped
bullets like madden, john's son just like rock
rock stages, rock places, rock basements I came in
rock stadiums, gymnasiums, atriums, even aliens
uranium cranium blazin homosapiens
abrasions then leave rashes of radiation, it's chasing them
infinity infinities spittin' indefinitively
don't listen to me, feel me like audio braile, you see?
Spittin disease, disappear like phantom for players
I'm a sprayer, and I fuck the earth through all of it's layers
all of you scared, microphone sacred, a part of my skull
eyeballs are the crystals, rips through anybody at all
I can care less, hit you in your bare chest, fair press
she a fruitcake, eat all of her paired breasts
snare check, 1 2, ------ it's still there
lyricist with wickedness rapes goldyloxs with all the bears
Yeah.. that's like that, mic raps just fights back
I psych clap, magento waves bash night caps
Ingenius writtin seamtress is created by a genius
flow so seamless, got many bitches beggin to really be this
peep it, believe it, I'm the hottest ever under the sun
like Joe Budden, gotta love it, and my number is one.

1000 Degrees...Celcius

I press keys like Ray Charles but I'm not blind
lyrical one of a kind, card shaped like a nine
fly rhymes like lined paper writtin airplanes
spittin scares lames, my brain covered in flames
1000 degrees hotter then the core of the earth
stick my dick inside the nature, I just bore her to birth
testicles gasoline holder, my dick is a flamethrower
no wonder I smell scrambled eggs when I stick it in lovers
got guns clappin like kids that's countin' syllables
rounds go kill a fool, tylanol pills won't stop it too
I cock a two like cockatoo's, drop a fool in a pool
of lyrical acid like Ja Rule against Em too
I never fuck around, I just stick it right to my point
I don't give a fuck if I'm to blunt, I'm not a fuckin' joint
born to write, chromosomes spell out B.I.C
no arms? I got 8 like I'm A.I.T
believe in that, lyricist that's never wack, letters splat
every word that I spat, dope condensed in a track
choke you infact, poking ya raps till it fuckin collapse
prognosis reports on my lap is saying that I'm back
I'll never give up, 1000 degrees celcius boy
I'm telling you boy, you aint even next to me boy!!
LMFAO@ Brittney, bitch looking worse than a chupacabra mixed with a broken down coyote. You're disgusting ugly, so ugly in fact, my brain simultaneously exploded while processing how bitterly grotesque you look. I would much rather stick ice picks into the walls of my cranium, then stick my dick into your quagmire of a clitoris. You're what would happen if a sperm whale mated with a Godzilla fish..


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Re: 1000 Degrees Celcius

Postby Fa-Q » Aug 6th, '09, 02:42

At first I was like wow the first lines are dope...then the next couplet was dope...then the whole fuckin song was dope....good drop man....
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Re: 1000 Degrees Celcius

Postby MC Anonymous » Aug 6th, '09, 02:44

Fa-Q wrote:At first I was like wow the first lines are dope...then the next couplet was dope...then the whole fuckin song was dope....good drop man....

:worship: What was ya fave line?
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Re: 1000 Degrees Celcius

Postby Fa-Q » Aug 6th, '09, 02:48

bitch victora, here's the secret, son will be victorious
never spittin boring shit, tournin stages with frozen wrists

then this
Lyrically I'm on top, you can't see me, bombs drop
see me at the pawn shop I'm pawnin' ya mom's watch

lol i was like wow...
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Re: 1000 Degrees Celcius

Postby MC Anonymous » Aug 6th, '09, 02:51

Fa-Q wrote:bitch victora, here's the secret, son will be victorious
never spittin boring shit, tournin stages with frozen wrists

then this
Lyrically I'm on top, you can't see me, bombs drop
see me at the pawn shop I'm pawnin' ya mom's watch

lol i was like wow...

:worship: Thanks man.
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Re: 1000 Degrees Celcius

Postby Fa-Q » Aug 6th, '09, 02:55

your my favorite CWer...so much talent and Im not being an ass kiss...YahHah likes you too...sometimes I wonder where the fuck did you get that lol
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Re: 1000 Degrees Celcius

Postby MC Anonymous » Aug 6th, '09, 02:56

Fa-Q wrote:your my favorite CWer...so much talent and Im not being an ass kiss...YahHah likes you too...sometimes I wonder where the fuck did you get that lol

Hahahaha thanks bro, means a lot to me cause' you got good talent also. :y:
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Re: 1000 Degrees Celcius

Postby Fa-Q » Aug 6th, '09, 02:59

naw i dont have IM just never have but thanks man
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Re: 1000 Degrees Celcius

Postby Emadyville » Aug 6th, '09, 03:03

Fa-Q wrote:Lyrically I'm on top, you can't see me, bombs drop
see me at the pawn shop I'm pawnin' ya mom's watch


Yeah this shit stood out big time, I liked how you wrote this, it was similar to how you normally put together lines and rhymes but how you used your vocab was different which I liked, rhymes were real good, some parts seemed too random but overall this was highly enjoyable :y:
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Re: 1000 Degrees Celcius

Postby MC Anonymous » Aug 6th, '09, 03:05

Emadyville wrote:
Fa-Q wrote:Lyrically I'm on top, you can't see me, bombs drop
see me at the pawn shop I'm pawnin' ya mom's watch


Yeah this shit stood out big time, I liked how you wrote this, it was similar to how you normally put together lines and rhymes but how you used your vocab was different which I liked, rhymes were real good, some parts seemed too random but overall this was highly enjoyable :y:

Haha yeah this is supposed to showcase my lyrical ability like Underground with Em. Diff is I'm using a wayne beat when I record it. *hint hint for something to come in a package.. :shifty:*
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Re: 1000 Degrees Celcius

Postby classthe_king » Aug 6th, '09, 03:05

Wow, you weren't kidding. Those lines you showed me were just the beginning. I haven't been here long enough to know but this is definitely one of the dopest pieces i have ever scene. Lyrical slaughter from begining to end.
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Re: 1000 Degrees Celcius

Postby MC Anonymous » Aug 6th, '09, 03:10

classthe_king wrote:Wow, you weren't kidding. Those lines you showed me were just the beginning. I haven't been here long enough to know but this is definitely one of the dopest pieces i have ever scene. Lyrical slaughter from begining to end.

:worship: :worship: :worship: :worship: :flower:
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Re: 1000 Degrees Celcius

Postby JPearson » Aug 6th, '09, 03:23

aint gunna go on coz id be typing for ages but fuckin sick man 9.9999/10

loved the 'mouth is dripping sight' line :y:
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Re: 1000 Degrees Celcius

Postby MC Anonymous » Aug 6th, '09, 03:28

JPearson wrote:aint gunna go on coz id be typing for ages but fuckin sick man 9.9999/10

loved the 'mouth is dripping sight' line :y:

Hell yeah :worship:
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Re: 1000 Degrees Celcius

Postby Spyder » Aug 6th, '09, 03:28

its workin :p

this was sick man, ripped up CW i love the rhymes as usual and vocab is top notch Anonymous shit.

testicles gasoline holder, my dick is a flamethrower
no wonder I smell scrambled eggs when I stick it in lovers GREAT :laughing:


no arms? I got 8 like I'm A.I.T we have somethng in comman :shifty:
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