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Re: The Keystyle Filez

Postby JMG » Jul 17th, '09, 05:56

Bar Graph

You aint stopin me see, cuz C.A.N aposterfee T
I wont let u devils and demons stomp on my dreams
cuz I got jesus with me and god on my team
and I never wanted to be a wanna be
so I rip this shit like it belongs to me
I reach for the trees the star's and moon
and hold them high till my arms cant move
I spit the hardest truth more then bar graph's do
fuck it i would be number one on that too
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Re: The Keystyle Filez

Postby JMG » Jul 19th, '09, 04:18

Tommy Knockin

the beat gets my heart pumping and my body rockin
my flows outta this world i guess im tommy knocking
im the king of writing but my name aint stephen
these facts as far from fiction and i make believing
you aint got a choice to feel me so u should scream rape
even tho i make ur ear drums cum and your knees shake
I just go where the blunt takes me i dont fuckin care
gettin down on the beat and i aint coming up for air
i feel it in my veins and it makes my blood pump
flowin like im bout to spit my heart and lungs up
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Re: The Keystyle Files

Postby JMG » Aug 5th, '09, 06:55

Underated

im underated off the radar but on the same par as james r
u dont wanna trade bars im a bull i see red and take charge
I kick it in grave yards and cyhper with sprits
clambake in a casket while im writing my lyrics
and my only goal is to hurt u i guess im little vandictive
flowin to my dribbles and swishes cuz im ballin like chris is
I call it light distance and i guess thats why you guys missed it
but its time to wake I said UP AND ADAM
its breakfest bitches what the fuck you havin, how you want your eggs
im hotter then the oven rack is so ill just flip em on the page
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Re: The Keystyle Files

Postby gutawafang » Aug 5th, '09, 07:14

JMG wrote:Underated

im underated off the radar but on the same par as james r
u dont wanna trade bars im a bull i see red and take charge
I kick it in grave yards and cyhper with sprits
clambake in a casket while im writing my lyrics
and my only goal is to hurt u i guess im little vandictive
flowin to my dribbles and swishes cuz im ballin like chris is
I call it light distance and i guess thats why you guys missed it
but its time to wake I said UP AND ADAM
its breakfest bitches what the fuck you havin, how you want your eggs
im hotter then the oven rack is so ill just flip em on the page

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Re: The Keystyle Files

Postby JMG » Aug 6th, '09, 01:04

thanks bro :b:
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Re: The Keystyle Files

Postby JMG » Aug 6th, '09, 06:29

no.. :twisted:
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Re: The Keystyle Files

Postby Ice_Scarred » Aug 6th, '09, 21:24

JMG wrote:Underated

im underated off the radar but on the same par as james r
u dont wanna trade bars im a bull i see red and take charge
I kick it in grave yards and cyhper with sprits
clambake in a casket while im writing my lyrics

and my only goal is to hurt u i guess im little vandictive
flowin to my dribbles and swishes cuz im ballin like chris is
I call it light distance and i guess thats why you guys missed it
but its time to wake I said UP AND ADAM
its breakfest bitches what the fuck you havin, how you want your eggs
im hotter then the oven rack is so ill just flip em on the page


OMG!!! RIPPED! Dawg, your joint got me in right off the first bar. I'm mad I never checked your stuff out earlier.

The bolded lines are certified dope. Homie you ripped this right here....damm
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Re: The Keystyle Files

Postby JMG » Aug 7th, '09, 02:00

haha thanks man that means alot
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Re: The Keystyle Files

Postby JMG » Aug 11th, '09, 04:24

Rap MacGyver

like drunk sex on bottom bunk beds.. you dont wanna bump heads
i stay hot and fresh like when the sun sets
...or taking a bitches innocence
im gonna touch the sky and leave my fingerprints
you wanna bet just tell me what the winner gets
I live for this so thats what my exitence is
my first words were a full bar, i raped in diapers
spittin flames had me catchin fire to my pasifyers
and im on a mission call me the rap MacGyver
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Re: The Keystyle Files

Postby Solace » Aug 11th, '09, 19:51

First words line was funny, that was a nice keystyle; better than anything I can come up with for keys. You should just drop normal written pieces now that you've gotten like what? 60 keystyles? lol
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Re: The Keystyle Files

Postby JMG » Aug 12th, '09, 01:24

thanks for the feed, and ur right solace ill probaly post a regular piece sometime in the near future
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