Make A Name

[classthe_king]

Added two verses too an already wrote first verse. Kind of short, let me know what you think.

Your hope I devastate,
And nope I’ll neva taste the pain you’ve tasted
Or the blood, sweat and tears that you’ve wasted
Throw me the best you’ve got homie ive faced it
The broken rhymes in my unspoken mind pasted
Together to form this clever storm, ive made it rain
And if you lost it all then you’ve played the game
Standin over eighty slain rappers
Bendin over backwards just tryin to get you to say my name
Metaphorically, cause you focused to back then
Cause historically I ain’t supposed to happen
They’ve distorted me so you won’t to be exposed to rappin
And it worries me cause ive posted as crap when
Really I’ve had it good, truly I ain’t worth the skill
But it has all set me up for the perfect kill
I know that I probably deserved it still
But why when in the end I preferred the bills

Im just trying to go out and make a name
Have everyone sayin class as I go out and take the pain
I’ve attained over the years and go out and change the game
This endless struggle over just trying to make a name

Sick wit determination he’s been pierced wit the fire
He’s out for extermination but he’s fierce wit desire
It’s all up for interpretation but the fears we acquire
Will soon burn your face in wit the tears we inspire
He appears as a liar but he will give it all for the game
Fall in the flames; the burning is earning them callin ya name
I wish to be ballin like James and fight for the respect I deserve
Expect to be served wit your own shit like I reflected ya words
Im erect with the urge to do battle so much that’ll overwhelm me
Fighting against all odds it seems like im fighting on helms deep
But like then I’ll be victorious cause im striking with glory’s fist
To take a name and make the pain that has made me notorious

Chorus
For most the hunger inside grows till it explodes like thunder then dies
But not me, ill break ya spine and take whats mine as I plunder my prize
I went under disguise as the quite little white boy who just loved to do it
Took my ball and chain, made a wall of pain and shoved you through it
Nothin to it, striking back, fighting rap with that nineties state of mind
Talk about yo fan base but when I spit I send nine g’s straight to mine
Finding crazy rhymes to paste together and make whatever I say a ballad
Take what you’re supposed to do and exposin you so what you say is invalid
Your whole game is pallid, without a hope you have been left in the dark
Now you’re wit the big dogs so you’re a bit fraud when you pretend to bark
I’ll lend a spark cause im on fire so I can give you the flame to make it
But when that’s warm ill take the platform that keeps you up and break it
And I hate it when you get pissed wit your slit wrists and you stomp n’ hate
I will always pull through my game is full proof I will never compensate
Watch n wait, ill rip anyone up you should never get in bed wit me sire
I will never stop comin at you because satisfaction is the death of desire


Chorus

I wrote the chous in like 10 seconds real quick, i know its not very good

[Ka0t1c]

i thought it was pretty cool, i like the rhyme pattern u made

[classthe_king]

Thank you

I started rapping a couple monthes ago but i wasn't very good but i just picked it up again.

anyone else

[BILI]

Its dope man...I loved rhyming,it flowed really good...and hook is good too even tho you wrote it in 10 sec..

[classthe_king]

Haha Thanks

[classthe_king]

Bump

changed a bit at the end of the last verse

[gutawafang]

Your rhymes are complex, pretty good multis. You got skills man. I liked some vocabs you used there like "plunder" and "pallid". Drop more often my man.

[mcZu]

Pretty dope rhyme pattern, I enjoyed reading this piece. Keep it up

[classthe_king]

Thank you for checking out . Now that two-a-days are over ill be able to write more.