Deja Vu / I Cry (my heart went into this one)

[BILI]

dope man...really good I loved it



I loved this part
cause i just upped and pissed away; all of our love; and disarrayed -
all of the past and christmas came; i had our pictures in a frame
and now you're gone and it's a shame; will never say that it's the same

[classthe_king]

wow, i thought this was great. Could totally relate to it. I loved these lines.

and no one shines the way you do, each second is like a day with you
i don't know what to say to you, somehow it feels like deja vu ..

[Almostlity]

that came straight from your heart man, i appreciate it

[BILI]

Yo man check some of my shit
viewtopic.php?f=24&t=65162&hilit=something+I+wrote
viewtopic.php?f=24&t=65388
viewtopic.php?f=24&t=65220&p=826313&hilit=my+life#p826313

[JPearson]

very good, good story, ryhmes n all that WELL DONE! really liked it

u said 'boo' lol not member ur old thoughts on the word?

[gutawafang]

The multis are damn good homie. And it felt like an experience. Good story and concept. I like your drops man.

[SajN]

but i hope that what you say is true; 'cause when i'm here i lay with you
i poke you tease you play with you; we spilt a drink i'm blaming you(haha)
and no one shines the way you do, each second is like a day with you
i don't know what to say to you, somehow it feels like deja vu ..

I don't really feel that part, because of the underlined rhymes.
Like 2-3 rhymes that ends with you, like those^^, are alright, but 5 it's a little boring IMO.

The rest was great. Nice multies and great emotions