Requiem For a Dream

[mcZu]

Delivered with an angry delivery, BEAT USED.
Not sure if I'm done, yet.

Requiem For a Dream:
I aspire to respire spirals of fire
Then hire wired tires just to ride along ‘till I’m tired and then fire
it’s tiring to be inspired
I rather be the one who inspires the people who oppose liars

A sire on his Scotland yard shit, drop bars on people who jack the ripper
Sober and high, yet I scotch land just to differ
Genocide for a nightmare? Naah, I beg to differ, mister
Call this a requiem for a dream, ceasing optics see the lyrical reasons
My core is based on diseases, son, a Caesar season
Cortisone needed to come near this seizure causing creature
Jesus like pen game, a messiah creating demons cursed
To ensure the adverse reversed in each verse I add to the hearse
Never rehearse, same as you never being in a re-hearse
I loch Ness the flow of your mess
I lock the respiratory flow of success and then say you suck, yes
Break a leg?
I demolish whole anatomies when I hit the brake with a leg
We differ that much, no analogies when I break the peg
I use the ink to encourage people to think past
The misuse ya’ll show, so, yes, I bring back the past
I’m back to back with the past, yet I pass the past
Keep the future in mind, naah, the future don’t mind
If I collide the past with it, and present a new gift I call the present
It feels like I’m the only one present
Or I’m the one who skipped class and ya’ll are present?
It’s a clash between class and animal tactics pressing towards the end
I throw words at stones, just to chauffeur the end…


Feedback appreciated.

[Spyder]

pretty ill, but i didnt like the way words rhymed with themselves. like past you used alot. fire. and end. but toher than that dope

[mcZu]

Thanks Scotty and Spyder

[Emadyville]

Not bad I enjoyed it

[mcZu]

Thanks Emadyville