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No More Washed Up Flow (Quick 16)

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No More Washed Up Flow (Quick 16)

Postby Solace » Aug 14th, '09, 03:42

I may act a little drastic, at least I'm really spitting,
Whenever I hear your music it's like I'm listening to plastic,
Get your fake asskicked, I'm a massive problem,
I'm like LeBron, you can't even get one in the basket,
"Boo hoo, your life's so tragic, write another emo song"
Shut the fuck up faggot, I write shit because I've had it,
I spit magic, you'll never match up to my standards,
You can't even talk without friends backing you so can it,
I can't stop laughing, kid you're calling me ugly,
Not once has a girl even found your ape ass attractive,
I'm hungry like I'm fasting, your fatass can't get enough,
You go to fast food restaurants "One of each", fantastic,
Give me a safe, I'll crack it, you can't open your own door,
Most people regard your musical attempts as static,
Freestyle wack shit yet you're astounded, amazed,
Cause no matter how little I try, you're the wackest.

A bit bored, practiced a new flow.
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Re: No More Washed Up Flow (Quick 16)

Postby Spyder » Aug 14th, '09, 03:44

i like it man, flows a lil weird but i get the flow so it was god for me :y: :y:
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Re: No More Washed Up Flow (Quick 16)

Postby Emadyville » Aug 14th, '09, 03:47

I honestly think with that rhyme scheme I picked up the flow, that was honestly pretty sick and correct me if im wrong but that was a direct diss at someone?

DOPE :worship:
Menzo wrote:Its cuz you're dope and Daddy Dubs. No one fucks with that


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Re: No More Washed Up Flow (Quick 16)

Postby Unscarred » Aug 14th, '09, 03:48

Very good man, i liked it, keep it going :worship:
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Re: No More Washed Up Flow (Quick 16)

Postby Ka0t1c » Aug 14th, '09, 03:52

good write, i'm glad you used that style ;)
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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Re: No More Washed Up Flow (Quick 16)

Postby Fa-Q » Aug 14th, '09, 03:53

I like where you rhymed a word in the middle and then began another rhyming scheme...its good keep this flow up
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Re: No More Washed Up Flow (Quick 16)

Postby gutawafang » Aug 14th, '09, 04:19

Just...








WOW. :y:
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Re: No More Washed Up Flow (Quick 16)

Postby Solace » Aug 14th, '09, 04:19

I'm damn surprised at the comments here lol I'm glad you all liked it!

@Emadyville, nah it wasn't a diss at someone; i just dont have much else to say for now other than insults haha.
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