dark,evil, Devil thoughts.

[emzee-frenzy]

honney i'm sorry for ya but youre tears don't matter to someone with paranoia
yeah manic depressed, try to test me you get messed
the fuck up, get in the truck slut or im'a chop you into pieces like a puzzle
blood pomping out of your neck like a fire hose nozzle
mentally ill, gently kill, swiftly steal
throwin you down a hill in your automobile
Despicable villain, encryptical skillin
Mental drillin' from my subconcience revealin'
yo, i'll throw you down a flight of steps
and take the elevator so i can wait for you and crack your head
break your legs, bitch your next, i'll take those meds
Psychotic, high on chronic , walking on the street robotic
Demonic, Flying high-speed methaphors like supersonics
Giving birth to disaster, spell caster, black-magic master
The anti-christ transmuting lyrics into evil spirits to spread the hate Zeitgeist
in the disguise of a nice guy, poltergeist haunting your mind in a quiet night
Sacrificing virgins for the god of my own fun
crucifying nuns, burning crying sluts, collecting their hearts
practicing necromancy in the war cemetery
Army of zombies, organised in collonies, aint that scary?
i'll kill you like you expected, little bitch you get cemented
turned into a wall in my house, in a hole of a mouse
the end is near, i'll dissapear like David coperfield
usin your wife as a human shield, in the battlefield
got her skull cracked and her scalp peeled.

[gutawafang]

I see you improving a whole lot man. Practicing works for you. The whole piece was awesome man, other than some words that don't fit, like they just there cuz they rhyme. But other than that, it's pretty good man.

[emzee-frenzy]

yeah maybe youre right..i'm still a begginer dough, i started writing like 2-3 weeks ago, trying to improve thx

[Ka0t1c]

it wasn't too bad, i see potential from your use of words, in particular i like this part the best:

i'll dissapear like David copperfield
usin your wife as a human shield, in the battlefield

[emzee-frenzy]

thx , yeah it wasn't too bad, but wasn't good either, got lots to learn