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8-14

Postby mcZu » Aug 14th, '09, 19:20

The tittle refers to when I wrote this, today; hence, it being 8-14.

8-14:
Deserted vibe eager to flow fly and fierce like a desert eagle in sequels
You can’t run, so knee like speakers before you brain be in the air like eagles
Back pack rap back to gangsta rap, back to back? Naah you aint from the west
You more like lost in 8 bars instead of seasons –see, son, I call you East Pack

A saying along the lines you can’t go through, blame me? Go sue Goku
Superb flow playing on higher notes, fill you in with my quotes –you’re a Sudoku
Your played out like spinning rims, Nike punches and the ones with Iverson
I give killers pain, no need for Vicoden –a Viking king on each verse I go in

I’m a lion you a row in a herd; cowardly getting L’s, your done when I son
Zu a truth speaking Sultan –you? A gay lying king like Elton John
I’m dope, if you view me; you get a coke sight, leave ya paralyzed per pair fight,
So prepare the fight –and be fair to yourself and just take flight

I run rap, my bars the foot note; so when I hip hop quote I always break a leg
My feet jump off with a mood like Joey’s mixtapes –leaking blood, my task
So you can see it with your own site, after I’m done you can call it a bootleg
I only chase my dreams, I’m before ya‘ll, a for man – left the camera on on deck [..House..]
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Re: 8-14

Postby classthe_king » Aug 14th, '09, 19:30

Haha i liked it, i thought the second one was the best.
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Re: 8-14

Postby mcZu » Aug 14th, '09, 20:01

classthe_king wrote:Haha i liked it, i thought the second one was the best.


Thank you Class :b:
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Re: 8-14

Postby gutawafang » Aug 15th, '09, 15:18

hmmm. The flow was good and kinda unique cuz your structure made it hard to breathe when I rap it out.

It was awesome though. I'd say it's very inspiring as it makes me wanna practice a lot harder to write good multis and good flow like this one. :y:
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Re: 8-14

Postby mcZu » Aug 15th, '09, 17:22

Coleon wrote:It's young Crooked, you had a leg till my pump took it, now you hip hop cause you one footed


You are reaaaaaaaaaaaaaaching, lmao.

gutawafang wrote:hmmm. The flow was good and kinda unique cuz your structure made it hard to breathe when I rap it out.

It was awesome though. I'd say it's very inspiring as it makes me wanna practice a lot harder to write good multis and good flow like this one. :y:


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