A Simple Note

[Solace]

[Verse 1]
Hold all of these memories close to heart and most of all,
Cherish the time we spent together, we were just a joke to start,
I felt happy for once, no st-st-stuttering in conversation,
What could we have become has become my contemplation,
Your face, I try to erase it from my brain but it doesn't work,
All this time I've been wasting I hate it, yeah man love it hurts,
I stutter worse, I've drugged this curse and made it worse,
Starving myself from being with you has just created thirst,
I have to write this but the way it hurts just to write a verse,
Delays the cure, builds up pain, and every night it's worse,
Everytime I've lurked on the thought of you has made me cry,
I'm pondering the simple fact if I should maybe die,
Rip every piece of you from me so I can go back to sleepin',
I'm enslaved and I've been enraged in cage like a demon,
I'm a changed person, I'm hurting, how could this pain worsen?
And your little plan to wrap me up well yeah it stays working.

[Chorus x2]
Something about you just draws my attention,
Just wish this tight grip upon my heart would just lessen,
I'm always stressing on the fact that I fell for you,
Wish it were a lie whenever I said we were never true.

[Verse 2]
Part of me wants to end this, forget about you then it's over,
Luck has never been a friend even holding a four leaf clover,
The other half wants to care for you, gently caress your hair,
But for me in reality it ain't so easy when you're never there,
What happened, why did we grow so far apart, tell me,
Answer the fucking voice in my head that's always fucking yelling,
Remember when we would turn on my iPod and talk non stop?,
Now we barely even speak, what was it that I did wrong?
Your beautiful pale blue eyes, you and your lovable laugh,
Have changed to bad reminders, our days were nothing but past,
But I wouldn't want to interfere with your happiness no,
Just needa get it out my system, that's why I'm rapping this so,
I take this picture out of the frame, just wish I could go for a re-do,
I could go on writing about you longer than I really need to,
So I might as well end this soon, end it rather than relive it,
I'll just smile at the memories, try to move on and forget it.

[Chorus x2]

[Slimm]

Deep shit man.. Some of the lines really stood up like i told you on MSN, i read it and felt your pain. I dont care bout multis or metaphores but i liked it, good job man.

[Solace]

I appreciate you checking it out man, real glad you liked it

[Solace]

Thank you Scott

[gutawafang]

Almost wanted to cry reading it. It's a simple note but it's complex man. I loved it.

Flow's good as usual. Multis as usual. Story's good.

[mcZu]

Is this 'bout hip hop?

Dope, indeed. Loved both verses and the chorus. Rhyming was kinda simple, but it did it's job. Flow was smooth and almost flawless. Keep it up man.

[Solace]

Almost wanted to cry reading it. It's a simple note but it's complex man. I loved it.

Flow's good as usual. Multis as usual. Story's good.

Thanks, I'm glad you liked it bro.

Is this 'bout hip hop?

Dope, indeed. Loved both verses and the chorus. Rhyming was kinda simple, but it did it's job. Flow was smooth and almost flawless. Keep it up man.

I hope you was being sarcastic about it being bout hip hop lol.

Glad you liked it, 5 stars up in this bitch! Smfh@ you saying rhyming was simple, you aint read them million multies? Fuck you.


Nah just kidding haha i appreciate you reading it

[Solace]

Is this 'bout hip hop?

Yeah I know Scott. It's obviously about Eminem.

[mcZu]

Is this 'bout hip hop?

Remember when we would turn on my iPod and talk non stop?,

[Ka0t1c]

some parts go hard! great ending

[BILI]

Man that was pretty good...I like it a lot

[Solace]

Is this 'bout hip hop?

Remember when we would turn on my iPod and talk non stop?,

Or I could just mean the girl and I put the earphones on together and talked while listening to music...

Thanks Kaotic and Bili

[mcZu]

Or I could just mean the girl and I put the earphones on together and talked while listening to music...

Or you could just learn to appreciate my sarcasm

[Solace]

Or I could just mean the girl and I put the earphones on together and talked while listening to music...

Or you could just learn to appreciate my sarcasm

Fuck your sarcasm im busy appreciating Ella..

[Solace]

Lmfao so finally after getting owned by me millions of times you just say Bad cause you know you cant do shit better and if you tried you'd pretend that it was good. Nice try man, but you really dont want to step up to me no matter how brain dead you are.