commin' home with me tonight (emzee & gutawafang)

by **emzee-frenzy** » Aug 18th, '09, 10:03

commin' home with me tonight

gutwafang's verse :

Stepped in a club, the first I rap for the fun
Happy to dump my rhymes wack for the hum
Sing to this jump, I know you sink to this, stumped
Here's the link to this charm, fucking ring for this hump
Hotness, greatness, everything that's beautiful
I don't need all the bitches, I just fucking need a few
Everything that beautify, paint the skies and clarify
Definitions, make you cry like a fucking bacon over-fried
I know you cried, when I opened my mouth and you stare at me
Flushed when I compliment your see-through underwear, sexy
Smacked your ass then you said "come on let's go"
I was "Hey, we ain't done with the drinks yet, yo"
Look, I was supposed to have drugged her, make her high
That night I was intending to fuck her, kiss her thighs
But man, she just volunteered, I didn't have to spike a drink
She likes sex like Mariah Carey likes to sing
Now we on the bed, taking videos like Paris Hilton
It was a matter of seconds I cummed in her, but it was still fun
She said my dick could shoot like a fucking real gun
Next time we'll do it again, I said "deal, hun"

hook(x2)

we be chillin in the club, homies high feelin allright
we all willing to have some fun, red rum and colt 45
my vision is vigilent, spot a chicken and she's fried
girl collision is iminent, you comming home with me tonight

emzee's verse :

went to the club late last night, high as a kite,
met this slut like "Hi, you have some beautiful eyes"
"oh, you guys allways use those type of lies"
i don't talk fibs honey, theyre bluer then the clearest skies
tell me your sign, it's funny how her thighs slip so fast out of hand like money
we started to conversate as soon as i bought her a bacardi
she said her name was kate, pleasure meeting you, i'm jhonny
bitch was hot as a solar plate, got hypnotized by her body
talkin to her tits like " damn are you two real?"
then i heard her voice vaguely like "understand the way i feel?"
yeah for sure, i understand you babe,i feel the same way
"really?", thinking no but i ain't had shit else to say
"yeah babygirl, you precious little thing"
turned her head for a little bit and i
slipped some in her drink faster then she could blink an eye
she quickly started sweatin and loosing contact with me
"baby let me take you home, i think you got a little tipsy"
she said " i don't know i'm starting to feel a bit dizzy"
it's okay darling, no need to get frightened slut
tomorow morning, you won't remember shit so lighten up
finnaly made it, put her on the bed naked
what the fuck? she's waking up, fuck she's startin shaking
"where am i? help somebody help me, please"
fuck, i gotta do something 'fore someone calls the police
grabbed her by the neck and hanged her up, thought she was dead
so i smacked her just to check, roped her to the bed, and slapped her muff.

by **DƎRDYPK** » Aug 18th, '09, 10:51

nice smooth piece :y:

I like the idea of it being about drugging a girl & fucking her :worship:

both of your verses were on point & very nice :y:

keep up the good work :worship:

by **gutawafang** » Aug 18th, '09, 10:53

Thank you Derdy. It was my first time writing about it. Glad you enjoyed it man. :flower:

by **emzee-frenzy** » Aug 18th, '09, 10:56

yeah it was both our first times :flower:

by **classthe_king** » Aug 18th, '09, 15:21

Good job both of you, Gutawafang you were on point the whole time, the only thing I would suggest for you emzee is make you like more even out, instead of having
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make it more even.
But keep it up :y: