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Quick Verse

Postby classthe_king » Aug 19th, '09, 04:04

School Tomorrow :n: bored as hell so I wrote this to post it real quick, I don't know what a keystyle is suppossed to mean, but this is one for me lol.

Up Rockin this, straight droppin hit, stay anonymous
Say its synonymous but it autonomous, i promise this
All omniscient, full a confidence, your concert went
From all "bustin rhymes", to all disgustin crimes,
"respect my conglomerate" A bomb that went right
After the master craft, from class to Ap Then all
The bastards ask why I have got another ass to chap,
Its the aftermath from the transition, have your man wishin
he ain't on the damn mission, if you can't listen
then its my ambition to keep the entire clan pissin
Cause a tall transvestite sittin on sac's bedside
while hes on a website has less hype then if i dress right
Now lets fight
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Re: Quick Verse

Postby Fa-Q » Aug 19th, '09, 04:07

haha good verse my favorite was

From all "bustin rhymes", to all disgustin crimes,
"respect my conglomerate" A bomb that went right


lol and that sac line was funny...haha
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Re: Quick Verse

Postby scalia5 » Aug 19th, '09, 04:22

i dont start school till september 9. haha
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Re: Quick Verse

Postby Fa-Q » Aug 19th, '09, 04:25

scalia5 wrote:i dont start school till september 9. haha

...the fuck...ooook??
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Re: Quick Verse

Postby gutawafang » Aug 19th, '09, 06:48

scalia5 wrote:i dont start school till september 9. haha

BOT!!! Nah, just playing. :p

Anyways, class, that was pretty good flow but the rhymes are average.
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Re: Quick Verse

Postby emzee-frenzy » Aug 19th, '09, 07:09

verse was dope :y: , and i don't start schoool actually till september 15 :sweating:
"misoginistic mysteries missunderstood by missing mistresses,
throat slitting bitches in public then start killing witnesses" - emzee
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Re: Quick Verse

Postby BILI » Aug 19th, '09, 11:41

Cause a tall transvestite sittin on sac's bedside ----lmfao

and dope verse man :y:
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