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Death's Embrace (updated)

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Death's Embrace (updated)

Postby Requiem » Aug 20th, '09, 02:09

Death’s Embrace

News that I died you wouldn’t even catch wind,
Just a little note on the side of the newsprint.
Put in your two cents, this world is a nuisance,
My passing wouldn’t even stir up a movement,
I can’t take a breath without facing death,
Cold hands of ice, wrappin around my chest,
Drainin out life, or whatever’s left,
I guess it’s a test, I don’t know about yet,
Aim for respect, pain is the debt,
Hate, regret, maybe I should disconnect
My brain is in shambles from this battle I’ve handled.
I have ample ammo to turn off this channel.
Better light a candle, i might go out tonight,
I’ll need the light if I decide to lose the fight.
There’s a fire goin off in my mind, the
Lime light’s dyin, I think it’s my time.
Outside I look fine, but inside’s a lit mine,
I need a divine sign to throw me a line.
I’ve got the spark, all I need is it to shine,
My spirit and heart, darkness disaligned.
I don’t want the devil and my future intertwined,
So right now I hide behind the blind on a lifeline.

Chorus

Don’t hesitate, I might fail to respirate,
I can hear my heartbeat, it’s there but it’s faint,
The world’s growing bleak, I can’t escape fate,
I guess it’s too late, trapped in death’s embrace.
(repeat 2x)

workin on more so i might record it soon :happy:
Last edited by Requiem on Aug 20th, '09, 02:21, edited 1 time in total.
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Re: Death (An Escape)

Postby classthe_king » Aug 20th, '09, 02:17

Dope, flow and rhyming are great.
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Re: Death's Embrace (updated)

Postby Requiem » Aug 20th, '09, 02:26

thx guys :flower:

and yea, hopefully it'll drop soon :angry:
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Re: Death's Embrace (updated)

Postby gutawafang » Aug 20th, '09, 02:26

Dope flow, period.
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Re: Death's Embrace (updated)

Postby Solace » Aug 20th, '09, 04:55

Yeah you've definitely stepped shit up...I loved it other than multies, iunno im just a guy that's picky about the multies lmao...sue me.
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