cold n warm

by **Ka0t1c** » Aug 20th, '09, 08:10

i can't drink or smoke marijuana anymore for now since i am overseas as a soldier in war
but i am gonna be free when i'm outta this horror, i'm only 24 and everything really stinks
still i must follow orders cuz if i ignore em, i know i will sink and not grow much older
what was i thinkin by joinin the army cuz instead of good dreams, it seems like torture
oh lord bring me home before i get mortared, show me my motive to help keep me motored
i mean well oiled cuz i got these boulders on both my shoulders so it's harder to breathe
still i gotta peddle my feet forward if i'm longing to reach tomorrow mornin
Kaotic cannot fall asleep, my eyeballs are wide open like a crack fiend on soda
and i'm not talkin bout caffiene like coca cola to get me rollin like a coaster
i'm finna turn postal, no joke like steve urkel, if only i could smell the leaves
of herbal tree purple, that would help me to see northern lights n feel warmer
cuz it'd help the peace inside left dormant to speak importance to all the world's corners

by **Ka0t1c** » Aug 20th, '09, 08:33

cool man, that's funny i said steve urkel and then seeing you siggy!

by **gutawafang** » Aug 20th, '09, 08:40

Poetic, period. :y:

Damn good choice of words to make it deep.

by **Ka0t1c** » Aug 20th, '09, 08:41

thanx for the feed and i'm glad u understand this piece

by **Ka0t1c** » Aug 20th, '09, 08:44

by **emzee-frenzy** » Aug 21st, '09, 13:18

soldiers deserve my respect, even if i'm not an american :y:

, btw, good piece private :flower:

by **Ka0t1c** » Aug 21st, '09, 19:17

im not a private, that would be an insult to me

by **Emadyville** » Aug 21st, '09, 19:26

Kaotic wrote:im not a private, that would be an insult to me

don't take it to heart man he obviously didn't know

this was pretty deep shit again, I found this very poetic vs a verse which was cool to read, again great work :y:

by **Ka0t1c** » Aug 21st, '09, 19:33

i know he didn't know just like u didn't understand me, it's all good

by **mcZu** » Aug 21st, '09, 19:35

Enjoyed it, great piece. :b:

by **Emadyville** » Aug 21st, '09, 19:36

Kaotic wrote:i know he didn't know just like u didn't understand me, it's all good

wait, what didn't I understand lol I'm lost

by **emzee-frenzy** » Aug 21st, '09, 19:41

Kaotic wrote:im not a private, that would be an insult to me

my bad man..,

by **Ka0t1c** » Aug 21st, '09, 19:46

im just letting u know i didn't take it to heart and telling u im not a private. thanx for ur reviews!

by **emzee-frenzy** » Aug 21st, '09, 21:06

no problem man :flower:

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