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Re: SiCkNeSs

Postby gutawafang » Aug 16th, '09, 16:45

HAHA. The last line was pretty good.

I BET the whole verse you did here is done to Underground beat. I mean, it flows to that. Your multis are quite good and it fits when you use them.

Not really a good line but I reallly liked it man: are you still peeping this? wanna know what your secret is?
your a jealous lil fuck, mean only cause your jealous of me you bitch

First few lines are pretty dope man. :y:

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Re: SiCkNeSs

Postby BILI » Aug 16th, '09, 16:45

All I can say is :worship:
thats dope man
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Re: SiCkNeSs

Postby emzee-frenzy » Aug 20th, '09, 23:02

fuck i was thinking of undeground too when i started reading your verse, and by the way , i think it's dope :flower:
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Re: SiCkNeSs

Postby Joe M » Aug 23rd, '09, 02:56

^above dudes said it all basically.

flow was on point all throughout. multi's were dope. especially the inward rhymes, those helped it keep movin.
overall, dope.
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