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not fair

Postby Ka0t1c » Aug 21st, '09, 00:04

our world is not fair, it's a pyschological warfare where there's mighty obstacles to fight
just feel the atmosphere and see what's right
let your spirit appear with those who share this air
experience the carelessness in an era which bacteria's inherited in the area
be aware, we are the terrorists here in america, it's apparently clear
stare at the mirror when you get near to it
all entreprenuers tryna find a career, prepare, i'm very serious
cuz we carry the cure for adhering coherency, that i swear
we're primarily the superior samaritans, now bear these tears
i won't be an embarrassment when barriers premier
cuz tho i live in various nightmares in this period, i'll endure
i'll experiment with my ideas thru the years til the arrow shows no errors as i steer...
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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Re: not fair

Postby Requiem » Aug 21st, '09, 00:17

i really liked it but the first line reminded me alot of my track "manic depressed" :confusion:
"the world is not fair, it's like lyrical warfare" :whistle:
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Re: not fair

Postby BILI » Aug 21st, '09, 00:18

It was pretty good..I like this kind of stuff :) :y:
I hate when people just talk about murdering and shit
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