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Crash Course In Rap

Postby Jay-19 » Aug 23rd, '09, 14:20

Something I wrote in about 3 minutes when I couldn't sleep the other night.
No multies or nothing, just a little piece that I think turned out pretty nice. :8)

First of all pick up a pen, then you gonna take the hat off
And if you're unable or too fucking dumb to do that part
Then it's about time you reconsider your career choice
You managed to do these thing, then find a fierce voice
And rap about things that happened when you grew up
You still ain't getting no attention? Just try to be ruder
And now you gotta find a gimmick, Nelly had a band aid
If your gimmick's working, you gonna build a fan base
Soon as someone says something about you you don't like
You gonna have to man up or bring your crew to fight
Or make a diss record, that can also get the job done
If you wanna sell, then just rap about your problems
How your girl is cheating, dudes always beating on you
How you hold your town down, how they leaning on you
The first lesson's over, please check back for part two
'Cause if you wanna rap man, it really isn't hard to
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Re: Crash Course In Rap

Postby RebeLnInfamY » Aug 24th, '09, 02:20

Meh, interesting..
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Re: Crash Course In Rap

Postby Emadyville » Aug 24th, '09, 05:31

I really enjoyed that man, loved how you ended it, good piece :y:
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Re: Crash Course In Rap

Postby Jay-19 » Aug 24th, '09, 07:52

Thanks Emady!
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Re: Crash Course In Rap

Postby Arabian Shady » Aug 24th, '09, 11:43

nice bit of story tellin, nice flow 2 :y:
good 1
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We're all on the same page, Yet we're standing apart on different lines'
So when we face rage, Ya'll fake it and let THEM commit horrific crimes
50 years & going straight, Yet this performance aint worth your time,OUR
Shit is BACKSTAGE,Cause the front page aint worth Kashmir and Palestine.
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Re: Crash Course In Rap

Postby Jay-19 » Aug 24th, '09, 12:32

Thanks Arabian...

I would've liked it more complex, but since I wrote it in like 3 minutes, I'm happy with it.
Might upgrade it a little though, add 2 more verses and make a track out of it someday. :smoking:
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Re: Crash Course In Rap

Postby Emadyville » Aug 24th, '09, 23:45

Jay-19 wrote:Thanks Arabian...

I would've liked it more complex, but since I wrote it in like 3 minutes, I'm happy with it.
Might upgrade it a little though, add 2 more verses and make a track out of it someday. :smoking:


I highly suggest that OR get a feat on a song and do this verse cause I think it's pretty damn sick and a whole song might be too much for this concept/topic you know what I mean?
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Re: Crash Course In Rap

Postby Jay-19 » Aug 25th, '09, 01:26

^ I think you might be right Emady. :8)
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Re: Crash Course In Rap

Postby Arabian Shady » Aug 25th, '09, 10:34

Jay-19 wrote:^ I think you might be right Emady. :8)



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So when we face rage, Ya'll fake it and let THEM commit horrific crimes
50 years & going straight, Yet this performance aint worth your time,OUR
Shit is BACKSTAGE,Cause the front page aint worth Kashmir and Palestine.
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Re: Crash Course In Rap

Postby D'Leh » Aug 25th, '09, 20:52

great shit homieeee :y:
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