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Postby xariuss » Dec 24th, '05, 13:24

yeah, yeah


(chorus)
so you know the story of the kid who's lost
and nothing ever went his way
He had to be a man to fight the cause
since he's farthers been away
but don't get him wrong he's more then tough
he's the image of his trust
he's not the image of his farthers way
but the image of his family's love....

(verse)
yo, every word every lyric every time it's delivered
every time the pen hits the pad it makes my spine shiver
i don't know how to explain it but it's a feeling of angels
gods touch on my life and on my very fingers
it's holy but it's not the bible
my lifes biblical like i was i was life's angel
I'm walkin straight but in the shadows i'm always behind you
im in the mirrows i'm in ya eyes tryin to find you
am i lost why i am i searching for something that isn't there
it's like sitting back only to have a missing chair
i listen to music a way of escaping this world
the drugs i use em thery're good till your so pissed that you earl
i'm telling you now it's my mom my sister and i
there's no mister he died as soon as he went missin from our eyes
i looked upto him as the king of the world
till he disrespected my family now he showed me the shit in the world

(chorus)
so you know the story of the kid who's lost
and nothing ever went his way
He had to be a man to fight the cause
since he's farthers been away
but don't get him wrong he's more then tough
he's the image of his trust
he's not the image of his farthers way
but the image of his family's love....




yo i will prolly write more and put it as a song, but i jsut felt like writting something to a beat then so i did it as i typed in this post, tell me what you'se think , thanks
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Postby Inzanity » Dec 24th, '05, 14:02

I like it that was really good
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Postby Tomega » Dec 24th, '05, 14:09

nice rhymez
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Postby SoniK » Dec 24th, '05, 17:38

respect xarius
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Postby xariuss » Dec 25th, '05, 01:45

thanks for ya comments
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Postby Trigger » Dec 30th, '05, 02:19

yayo fukin amazing shit u just did right ther keep it up and propz
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Postby xariuss » Dec 31st, '05, 07:19

thanks for the comment man
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