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gettin shot at in da club

Postby drasticlyhated » Aug 26th, '09, 04:36

1,2,3 body's droppin like leaves
bitches runin and hoppin bullets like flee's
(yo boom you it?) yea son of a bitch,
omar lets bounce,but omar's fat ass is already
at the house watchin this shit on the news
(you fat fuck you left us dude) boom come on
we gotta get out lemme get to the trunk
then level shit out i got the chopper,whats good now
fuck they got tech 9's and shit we gone need help
(boom take the 12 and give em hell if they wanna pop shit
make em ring bells) i run behind the car to take position
why is the fuck is all my bullets not hittin but missin?
shit pass the bag its full of amunition that i thought we had
this shit is sad our tires are flat what a fag, i gues we on or own
boom save the mags for if u getta good shot then you betta
take it fast, cuz in a flash they'll be on our ass like a bucnh of
birds searchin for worms in grass
the shit i do most doers never done
ima fuck this beat ya bitch
you better come, better run this shit
i dont run from shit, i still b-beay
your ass like a fuckin drum stick
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Re: gettin shot at in da club

Postby Fa-Q » Aug 26th, '09, 04:38

this reminded me of One Shot Two Shot....lol it was just ok man sorry
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Re: gettin shot at in da club

Postby drasticlyhated » Aug 26th, '09, 04:46

lol hey thanks anyways. its not my best tho :shifty:
the shit i do most doers never done
ima fuck this beat ya bitch
you better come, better run this shit
i dont run from shit, i still b-beay
your ass like a fuckin drum stick
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Re: gettin shot at in da club

Postby Fa-Q » Aug 26th, '09, 04:48

drasticlyhated wrote:lol hey thanks anyways. its not my best tho :shifty:

yea ive read some of your other stuf...rest of your shit is dope
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Re: gettin shot at in da club

Postby drasticlyhated » Aug 26th, '09, 04:52

dope is good right? :unsure:
the shit i do most doers never done
ima fuck this beat ya bitch
you better come, better run this shit
i dont run from shit, i still b-beay
your ass like a fuckin drum stick
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Re: gettin shot at in da club

Postby Fa-Q » Aug 26th, '09, 04:56

drasticlyhated wrote:dope is good right? :unsure:

lol yes
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Re: gettin shot at in da club

Postby drasticlyhated » Aug 26th, '09, 05:02

lol ok thanx!jus makin sure thans for da support :flower: :y: :y:
the shit i do most doers never done
ima fuck this beat ya bitch
you better come, better run this shit
i dont run from shit, i still b-beay
your ass like a fuckin drum stick
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