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Guess Who's Fuckin' Back

Postby Solace » Aug 27th, '09, 18:11

Flawless Solace flows, awe and woah, how much further can Solace go?
My targets blow, got knives and nines while riding down my polished roads,
Theirs are broke, their cars can't go, 300 enemies, fuck the Spartan jokes,
They're telling me "Stop it yo". Yeah Lil Wayne dope? You just got Rick Roll'd,
And they don't know that I'm back, you rhyme wack as I literally rhyme crack,
If you tried that you'd get sidetracked, you've just fallen into my line trap,
Fast food style, while supersizing multies and flow, I can as I lie back,
Man I bet you're going to try and bite that, why else you think I write tracks?
Find a loophole when I tie ya lyrics in a knot, got every lyric from my heart,
All the spirits from the dark enlightened me to spear shit from the top,
So fuck your thoughts, "You're just a kid" yeah guys I hear it all a lot,
Fuck those dickriders, I'll attack you if you whatsoever appear up on my cock,
Bash hits, mash shit, create a classic, spitting real while ya saliva's like plastic,
Tragic things happen, asskicked by a kid with sporadic spastic rapping actions,
Get you in the casket, lock it then I trash it, planned all of my tactics,
Telepathic, and at last bitch I'm back shit, no return has ever been so massive.

EDIT: Fuck there was a missing word lol
Last edited by Solace on Aug 27th, '09, 18:26, edited 1 time in total.
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Re: Guess Who's Fuckin' Back

Postby gutawafang » Aug 27th, '09, 18:14

Ok, lemme guess who's fucking back...

Solace, right? :y: :y: :y:

Hell yeah! That was motherfucking dope man. Continuous multis, constant flow. A little touch of humour. I loved it. :flower:
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Re: Guess Who's Fuckin' Back

Postby King Bullet » Aug 27th, '09, 18:25

Now this was a sick blow...damn! I like the metaphores and multies are dope.Keep it up man. :y: :y: :y: :y: :y:
At least I know that I don't know...question is: are you bozos smart enough to feel stupid?!-hope so!!!
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Re: Guess Who's Fuckin' Back

Postby Solace » Aug 27th, '09, 18:26

Thanks both of you

Glad you guys liked it :worship:
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Re: Guess Who's Fuckin' Back

Postby Spyder » Aug 27th, '09, 18:32

im listening to forever and i couldnt help but flow this drop to Ems verse hahaahah
i gotta tell you it works tho.
i thought this was dope man, classis shit. glad your back
you and Zu keep the generals alive while Me,James, and Anon are gone :'(
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Re: Guess Who's Fuckin' Back

Postby Slim Zaddy » Aug 27th, '09, 18:33

that's hot shit homie , i really liked it ,, full of multies,, flow was there and dope ,, keep it comming bro ,, :y:
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Re: Guess Who's Fuckin' Back

Postby Drama Setter » Aug 27th, '09, 18:33

great drop again , thx solace :y:
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Re: Guess Who's Fuckin' Back

Postby Solace » Aug 27th, '09, 18:34

$(@TTY B@Y wrote:you never left :giggle:

I haven't wrote in like 1-2 weeks :sweating: I still fed sometimes tho.

Spyder wrote:im listening to forever and i couldnt help but flow this drop to Ems verse hahaahah
i gotta tell you it works tho.
i thought this was dope man, classis shit. glad your back
you and Zu keep the generals alive while Me,James, and Anon are gone :'(

Thanks man...And the flow was sorta inspired by his flow so yeah no wonder :sweating:

Slim Zaddy wrote:that's hot shit homie , i really liked it ,, full of multies,, flow was there and dope ,, keep it comming bro ,, :y:

Man thanks glad you were into it :worship:

drama setter wrote:great drop again , thx solace :y:

Thanks man...And you're welcome I guess haha :sweating:
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Re: Guess Who's Fuckin' Back

Postby mcZu » Aug 27th, '09, 18:35

This is dope, enjoyed reading it. Flowed great, rhymes are dope and the wordplay is fresh. :y:

And Spyder is right, we gotta collaborate to create some more buzz for the Generals. :o
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Re: Guess Who's Fuckin' Back

Postby Spyder » Aug 27th, '09, 18:37

ZU+SOLACE coming soon :shifty:
hopefully :D
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Re: Guess Who's Fuckin' Back

Postby Solace » Aug 27th, '09, 18:41

Props on the feed McZu.

Word Zu-lace got this shit tied up like a shoelace
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Re: Guess Who's Fuckin' Back

Postby mcZu » Aug 27th, '09, 18:42

^You should have kept that one for our collab, lol. :sweating:
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Re: Guess Who's Fuckin' Back

Postby Emadyville » Aug 27th, '09, 18:47

Nasty :worship:

What everyone else said lol everyone knows this was hot :y:
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Re: Guess Who's Fuckin' Back

Postby Steve Spag » Aug 27th, '09, 19:00

Damn man, that's some pretty hot shyte! Lyrics were dope, flow was flawless as always, multi's were awesome. No complaint's whatsoever.

Keep it up man, I'm proud of you!
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Re: Guess Who's Fuckin' Back

Postby Solace » Aug 27th, '09, 19:11

mcZu wrote:^You should have kept that one for our collab, lol. :sweating:

That aint shit compared to what we can come up with :smoking:

Emadyville wrote:Nasty :worship:

What everyone else said lol everyone knows this was hot :y:

Thanks Emady, real glad you liked it :y:

Steve Spag wrote:Damn man, that's some pretty hot shyte! Lyrics were dope, flow was flawless as always, multi's were awesome. No complaint's whatsoever.

Keep it up man, I'm proud of you!
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Thanks for checking it man, appreciated it and I'm also glad you liked it :sweating:
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