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Postby DrunkenDeath » Sep 8th, '09, 01:42

The teacher asked the class to write a poem or verse or somethin' about "our sorrow", so I came up with something that I was feeling and used a lot of rhymes and stuff, I might use some of it in a song someday.... anyone want to see it? I'll consider posting it.
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Re: So I kind of wrote a verse

Postby DrunkenDeath » Sep 8th, '09, 05:03

Menzo wrote:I'd like to see it :) I did that too in English class, I got it back with a level 4++ and the teacher told me to get it published....



...the verse I wrote IN English class was making FUN of English class lol



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it's on a computer at school, I'll get it tomorrow at school. I want to see how many people want to see what I wrote
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Re: So I kind of wrote a verse

Postby gutawafang » Sep 8th, '09, 05:05

LOL. I've never seen any of your verses. Why not? Post it man. ;)
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Re: So I kind of wrote a verse

Postby DrunkenDeath » Sep 8th, '09, 05:08

gutawafang wrote:LOL. I've never seen any of your verses. Why not? Post it man. ;)




lol... after the topic I made about how mainstream artists are forced to make subliminal messages.... I'm not sure if I want to sing anymore :(
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Re: So I kind of wrote a verse

Postby gutawafang » Sep 8th, '09, 05:09

Drunkendeath wrote:
gutawafang wrote:LOL. I've never seen any of your verses. Why not? Post it man. ;)




lol... after the topic I made about how mainstream artists are forced to make subliminal messages.... I'm not sure if I want to sing anymore :(

Being a lyricist doesn't really mean you have to sing. :flower:
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Re: So I kind of wrote a verse

Postby DrunkenDeath » Sep 8th, '09, 05:23

gutawafang wrote:
Drunkendeath wrote:
gutawafang wrote:LOL. I've never seen any of your verses. Why not? Post it man. ;)




lol... after the topic I made about how mainstream artists are forced to make subliminal messages.... I'm not sure if I want to sing anymore :(

Being a lyricist doesn't really mean you have to sing. :flower:



Good point. Maybe I could just act and write screenplays, and be an underground artist, and decline things that will make me millions, like merchandise and going on tour
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Re: So I kind of wrote a verse

Postby gutawafang » Sep 8th, '09, 05:29

Yeah man. I look forward to the verse. :)
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Re: So I kind of wrote a verse

Postby DrunkenDeath » Sep 8th, '09, 05:37

gutawafang wrote:Yeah man. I look forward to the verse. :)



:y:
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I may post it, maybe not. A lot of writers here, my work could end up stolen, ya know? I'm hesitant to post it now...
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Re: So I kind of wrote a verse

Postby gutawafang » Sep 8th, '09, 05:38

Drunkendeath wrote:
gutawafang wrote:Yeah man. I look forward to the verse. :)



:y:




I may post it, maybe not. A lot of writers here, my work could end up stolen, ya know? I'm hesitant to post it now...

Don't worry bout it. :) Seriously, don't worry bout it. ;)
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Re: So I kind of wrote a verse

Postby RapName » Sep 8th, '09, 07:23

Drunkendeath wrote:
gutawafang wrote:Yeah man. I look forward to the verse. :)



:y:
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I may post it, maybe not. A lot of writers here, my work could end up stolen, ya know? I'm hesitant to post it now...


Lol, I think everybody immidiatly thought of steeling your verse...
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Re: So I kind of wrote a verse

Postby theJFKshow » Sep 8th, '09, 07:50

fuck no please don't post it
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