The TRshady Forum became read-only in December 2014. The 10 year history will live on, in this archive.
Continue the discussion with the new home for the Eminem and Hip Hop discussion: HipHopShelter.com.

Shy kids

Want to share a poem, story or a moving article? Share creative literature text here.

Shy kids

Postby Yah-hah » Sep 9th, '09, 19:29

I tear and scream at the heartless listener,
And watch my artist sister paint the darkest picture,
With no more words like I tried to harvest winter,
And it's the darkest winter swimming upstream in the hardest river,
Until the shark fins enter these seas have never parted quicker,
They made me eat my words and I don't want part in this dinner,
Hopefully the hardest liqour can help me scarf it quicker,
Pardon the sinner when we march with liquor,
The darkest liquor makes me commit arson quicker,
I'm not the smartest offender when the darkness enters,
Sorry but the lights in my apartment flicker,
Sorry I shiver with arms full of sharpened splinters,
And though the artist differ theres still a genius behind it,
Even the heartless consider they can't seem to find it,
My eyelids are islands that are blinded by the green in my iris,
This lighnting shatters all night which is leaving me flightless,

Look at these words to really see what might is,
Look under that to see where I hide my life quick,
So guard your hearts closely all you little shy kids,
Love will lead you blinded to the darkness behind your eyelids

I revive the lesson only Apollo can teach,
For Posiedon to follow his reach he needs to swallow the beach,
Tomorrow we see the clouds fighting the groups,
Blinding the troops like the lightning of Zeus,
I'm blind and confused with no hand to guide me through,
I try to fight back but I find no use,
I find no truth and without it's useless,
I'm eating fruit from the tree of knowledge with a mouth that's toothless,
With a house that's roofless I have no shelter,
But neither does she so then I have to help her,
I seek the face of Death and she is so pretty,
No really I open up the door and took her home with me,
I'm so busy even my pen skips, my pen skips,
Just go with me and this book will eventually finish,
Potentially rigid and initially vivid,
Even the scriptures need witness to be officially gifted,
Swiftfully lifted to the edges of your iris,
Physically to the inches of your eyelids,
I put my hands out to find it but both my eyes are blinded,
They stay closed when it's hotter all the waterfalls behind it,

Look at these words to really see what might is,
Look under that to see where I hide my light shit,
So guard your hearts closely all you little shy kids,
Love will lead you blinded to the darkness behind your eyelids

Blinded so each vision is wrong,
So I can't find the words to finish this song,
Finish? How can I quit this how will I end this,
I'm only writing my thoughts all of which are endless,
All of it is written my words are eternal,
Flames flicker bright till they burn through the journal,
But they only burn when your holding me,
Only so many tears I can hold in me,
And on the meanest days when I mean to say,
I love you up above you skies of pink champagne,
I sink in the paint of my own brush,
Of my own lust I paint the night with my own touch,
This island has floated far from reality,
Even all the stars fall apart just to shout at me,
Tempararily paralyzed only brings temporary visions,
Over there sittin look how scary this is gettin,
Where he's forgiven from every decision barely living in this prison,
It seems like self-crucifiction in every word that I've written,
Even after the sun's risen it only eclipses behind the weeping moons existence,
The persistance of this temptation is drowned in my frustration,
The bitter taste of swallowing the ashes of my own cremation,
Image

"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


Nundea Mekeze comin soon May 4th
User avatar
Yah-hah
Renegade
Renegade
 
Posts: 2724
Joined: Jun 7th, '09, 09:25
Location: El Dorado, Kansas USA
Gender: Male

Re: Shy kids

Postby Fa-Q » Sep 10th, '09, 08:42

Dude this is crazy that second verse is perfect foreal...and the lines are shorter then your usual so I flowed it easier...this is a lot like my today, like paints a picture with your mind good work man
User avatar
Fa-Q
Pill Popper
Pill Popper
 
Posts: 8404
Joined: Dec 20th, '08, 21:15

Re: Shy kids

Postby Yah-hah » Sep 10th, '09, 14:10

Yeah I been trying to shorten my verses cause everyone was complaining about the 100 bar verses :P
Image

"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


Nundea Mekeze comin soon May 4th
User avatar
Yah-hah
Renegade
Renegade
 
Posts: 2724
Joined: Jun 7th, '09, 09:25
Location: El Dorado, Kansas USA
Gender: Male

Re: Shy kids

Postby gutawafang » Sep 10th, '09, 16:40

Masturbating to the multis. :o
ADD ME ON PS4: gutawafang
Currently playing: Destiny
Image
TR Rap Battle Record: 23-8
User avatar
gutawafang
Pill Popper
Pill Popper
 
Posts: 9474
Joined: Dec 13th, '07, 08:01
Location: Lion City
Gender: Male

Re: Shy kids

Postby Fa-Q » Sep 10th, '09, 20:16

Yah-hah wrote:Yeah I been trying to shorten my verses cause everyone was complaining about the 100 bar verses :P

lol yea but these are foreal perfect length
User avatar
Fa-Q
Pill Popper
Pill Popper
 
Posts: 8404
Joined: Dec 20th, '08, 21:15

Re: Shy kids

Postby Yah-hah » Sep 10th, '09, 21:13

gutawafang wrote:Masturbating to the multis. :o


Hahahahaha just for you :P
Image

"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


Nundea Mekeze comin soon May 4th
User avatar
Yah-hah
Renegade
Renegade
 
Posts: 2724
Joined: Jun 7th, '09, 09:25
Location: El Dorado, Kansas USA
Gender: Male

Re: Shy kids

Postby Yah-hah » Oct 12th, '09, 05:28

multies for days :whistle:
Image

"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


Nundea Mekeze comin soon May 4th
User avatar
Yah-hah
Renegade
Renegade
 
Posts: 2724
Joined: Jun 7th, '09, 09:25
Location: El Dorado, Kansas USA
Gender: Male


Return to Creative Writing



Who is online

Users browsing this forum: No registered users

cron