You Can't Stop Me (Feat. Bar)

by **Tash8** » Sep 25th, '09, 02:26

http://www.zshare.net/audio/66081984cd6ca3cc/

let me know waht u think... bar is the guy with the accent

by **gutawafang** » Sep 25th, '09, 02:28

The delivery and flow is fucking good. The beat suits the voice.

by **Steve Spag** » Sep 25th, '09, 02:32

Pretty sick shit. Only problem I have is that the volume is too low, both for the beat and the vocals. Is this your beat Tash? If so this is FUCKING HOT!

Anyways, great track, I liked the 1st verse best, but Bar's verse was nice aswell!

Keep it up guys.
:y:

by **Tash8** » Sep 25th, '09, 02:34

thanks guys, and no this isn't my beat!

btw, i do realize the first 2 lines are from jayz but i needed inspiration and he was my inspiration.

by **Xray** » Sep 25th, '09, 03:27

Dope collab, this reminds me to much of back in the days, when we all used to collab a lot. Tash your flow was consistent throughout the verse, except some minor parts where you slipped off beat a little. The delivery was good, and the tone of your voice was nicely done. I felt the lyrics, it was deep man. The flow to the hook kind of bugged me a little cause your flow was all over the place, also felt that you needed another additional line to the hook cause it got repetitive. Bar's verse was dope, flow was steady and on point throughout. And the lyrics were nice, good concept and a dope collab. :worship:

As for mixing, Tash I think its that time of year to get yourself Waves Diamond Bundle, its a VST pack that works on most programs, Cool Edit, FL, Adobe Audition etc. Linkin Park, Kanye West, Jay-Z, Snoop Dogg, and long with a lot more top selling artists get there vocals mixed using Waves (List of the artists that use it) Anyways my main reason I'm telling you to use this is because it brings the volumes of your mix up without ruining its quality. And I use it and I don't even master my tracks, somehow ever since I've gotten Waves Diamond Bundles, I don't have to master my mixes cause it masters it already. Trust me man you need it.

by **classthe_king** » Sep 25th, '09, 03:38

Dope

Don't usually check out audio much on here but this was hot. The beat was great, and your flow was great on it most of the time. I don't know about that weird echoing part you did sometimes though. Bar's verse was dope too but tbh the accent is weird to listen to. But your flow was great and your lyrics and rhymes were awesome. Hope to see more.

by **macdaddy019967** » Sep 25th, '09, 03:41

wow this is pretty good :smoking:

by **Tash8** » Sep 25th, '09, 03:53

thank you guys..

x-ray, yea man i have it and i use it

just not on this track for reasons i already explained!

btw you'll be seeing more of me soon, cause im getting a bag of the green in a few days and i'll be vibing the whole time i'm out this world!

by **,-,'-{Bar}-',-,** » Sep 25th, '09, 15:55

thanks alot yall for the feedback :worship:

tash you did great, you sound like you sorted the flow from the other version i heard, your delivery was strong and clear and your writingskills dont even need to be mentioned good stuff man, also mixing is ka-oool :worship:

by **B.A.D.** » Sep 25th, '09, 17:06

lmao, "the guy with the accent" :laughing:

I don't like the beat too much, although the guitar/piano that comes in at the middle of verse one is hot, amazing melody there

the volume of the pellas is extremely low, its really hard to pay a lot of attention to the lyrics.
youre flow evolved a lot man, sounding good man, plus I like your delivery :y:

hook is good, again volume is too low

bar's verse seems better mixed, even tho tash mixed both of em the same way I guess, but sounds clearer [quality & volume wise]... its a lil hard to understand the accent but I can enjoy the flow a lot and the emotion of the overal track, real good verse... postin the lyrics would help a bit :y:

overall: pretti decent, nothing to complain about except the volume on tash's verse and hook, other than that sick track, not my kind at all, but its good to listen too :y:

by **°[~CHR!$~]°** » Sep 25th, '09, 19:06

flow is mastered...aswell as the delivery....
...bar had a nice rhyme sheme...liked it very much
only flaw is the volume as everybody pointed out... :y:

by **Kez** » Sep 25th, '09, 21:23

As i told you, crazy song and some of your best yet.

Everyone has already pointed out the volume needs to be higher. I would critique but i already heard it before this and i don't wanna sound repetitive or shallow so i'll just say i liked the track.