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Fa-Q - I'll Fight Through Feat Yahhah

Postby Fa-Q » Oct 4th, '09, 08:19

(Fa-Q)
Welcome to the edge of your seat,
Its where your legs and feet,
Give the ledge a greet,
And your mind never begs to repeat,
And all your enemies pledge defeat,
So what happens if I die and become a dusty angel,
Can't see the light at the end, it must be the angle,
I can't be an angel, I got a mind of a killer,
Except mine is iller,
But mine is like time to a pillar,
But I'm learning my shame,
Is like my temper, a burning flame,
Or maybe its like trick candles,
Keeping my goals is like kicking in sandals,
I hope my little bit of confidence,
Keeps this time,
But doubts seeps in my mind,
I just hope I sleep fine,
My lost souls asking me,
Are you sure your running at full capacity,


All seasons change, from the freezing snow,
To being able to watch all flowers grow,
So I'll fight through, before I try and fight you,
Ill just fight through, instead of me trying to fight you,
To the hot summers, til when the leaves fall,
Til once more the winters call,
Ill just fight through, before I try to fight you,
Ill just fight through, instead of me trying to fight you,



(Yahhah)
This eternal winter is leavin my soul freezing,
My nose bleeding, and my flows decomposed from my own reaping,
Find Rome weeping, when I'm time zone tweeking,
My rhyme flow's peaking, while streaking past my freaking past,
I'm sinking last this quick sand is too strong,
I'm too gone, liquor hits quicker so I just move on,
Confidence? Often since I hopped the fence, I've lost the gift of common sense,
Structure? I front worse so my cuts hurt, when some heard a verse with one cuss word,
Like I'm just rhyming just to rhyme with multi-syllables phrases,
Yah-hah's just an improper witch doctor, with ultra pitiful placement,
This basement, this tomb,
This place is so gloom,
Each nameless rascist, I'm leavin faceless in my way since noon,
I'm struggling to keep my verses short,
I'm cursed for sure, and I know my thirst for more,
Will leave me worse before, the first person's formed on the coast and shore, to the ocean floor,
I'm only sometimes sober,
So I apologize that my un-timed closer, is one line over,


All seasons change, from the freezing snow,
To being able to watch all flowers grow,
So I'll fight through, before I try and fight you,
Ill just fight through, instead of me trying to fight you,
To the hot summers, til when the leaves fall,
Til once more the winters call,
Ill just fight through, before I try and fight you,
Ill just fight through, instead of me trying to fight you,


(Fa-Q)
My book sits around collecting dust,
Asking me to write more is like asking metal, correct rust,
I never planned to be here,
If I look at the man in the mirror,
I'm shaking in my boots just trying to stand clear,
I try and think happy thoughts,
So I learn to fight the bull shit,
By trying to bite of the bullet,
Or I might hold it,
If I could turn my memories into a picture frame,
It would be a mixture of pain,
And the devils evil temptations,
that are trick for my brain,
I'm like an eternal winter,
My want for my dream is like a internal splinter,
Its afraid, and I wonder when this fear stops,
I cry and so do my tear drops,
Then my sadness and cheer swaps,
And my sadness is happy once more,
I'm like an eagle, hatches then wants to soar,


All seasons change, from the freezing snow,
To being able to watch all flowers grow,
So I'll fight through, before I try and fight you,
Ill just fight through, instead of me trying to fight you,
To the hot summers, til when the leaves fall,
Til once more the winters call,
Ill just fight through, before I try to fight you,
Ill just fight through, instead of me trying to fight you,
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Re: Fa-Q - I'll Fight Through Feat Yahhah

Postby Fa-Q » Oct 4th, '09, 20:51

Hmmm now that I read it I'm not really feeling the chorus
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Re: Fa-Q - I'll Fight Through Feat Yahhah

Postby Yah-hah » Oct 5th, '09, 06:13

Oh well the verses are on point man
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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Re: Fa-Q - I'll Fight Through Feat Yahhah

Postby gutawafang » Oct 5th, '09, 06:14

Wow. :worship: I'm reading this again man. :y:
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Re: Fa-Q - I'll Fight Through Feat Yahhah

Postby Fa-Q » Oct 5th, '09, 06:26

Lol fish whatcha think on the second reað
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Re: Fa-Q - I'll Fight Through Feat Yahhah

Postby gutawafang » Oct 5th, '09, 06:30

Fa-Q wrote:Lol fish whatcha think on the second reað

honestly, the motherfucking vocab is motherfucking dope. that's why i need a second read. :p

kinda deep to me, but i dig it totally homie.

the chorus is not bad, actually.

multis. :y: :y: :y:

Full marks, maybe I can't get the flow homie. haha. but that's just me homie. keep it up man. :worship:
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Re: Fa-Q - I'll Fight Through Feat Yahhah

Postby Yah-hah » Oct 5th, '09, 06:32

gutawafang wrote:
Fa-Q wrote:Lol fish whatcha think on the second reað

honestly, the motherfucking vocab is motherfucking dope. that's why i need a second read. :p

kinda deep to me, but i dig it totally homie.

the chorus is not bad, actually.

multis. :y: :y: :y:

Full marks, maybe I can't get the flow homie. haha. but that's just me homie. keep it up man. :worship:

Weel you know once Fa-Q and Yah-hah get on a track multis are gonna be flyin everywhere :P 2 different flows but it's good
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Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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Re: Fa-Q - I'll Fight Through Feat Yahhah

Postby Fa-Q » Oct 5th, '09, 06:43

Lol gutaw thanks...you know we run multis like headless poultry...lol and idk the chorus might change...but the beat is insane it fits perfectly...its funny Jus' lines are hella long and mine are hella sort and were gonna collab on the same song :p
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Re: Fa-Q - I'll Fight Through Feat Yahhah

Postby Yah-hah » Oct 5th, '09, 06:48

Fa-Q wrote:Lol gutaw thanks...you know we run multis like headless poultry...lol and idk the chorus might change...but the beat is insane it fits perfectly...its funny Jus' lines are hella long and mine are hella sort and were gonna collab on the same song :p


Yeah man it's the yin and yang :P I got exrta long multi filled serious-all-the-time lyrics and you got those short multi filled serious/hilarious ryhmes and can flow off of eachother really good.
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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Re: Fa-Q - I'll Fight Through Feat Yahhah

Postby gutawafang » Oct 5th, '09, 06:50

Yah-hah wrote:
Fa-Q wrote:Lol gutaw thanks...you know we run multis like headless poultry...lol and idk the chorus might change...but the beat is insane it fits perfectly...its funny Jus' lines are hella long and mine are hella sort and were gonna collab on the same song :p


Yeah man it's the yin and yang :P I got exrta long multi filled serious-all-the-time lyrics and you got those short multi filled serious/hilarious ryhmes and can flow off of eachother really good.

WORD. :smoking:
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Re: Fa-Q - I'll Fight Through Feat Yahhah

Postby Yah-hah » Oct 5th, '09, 06:53

gutawafang wrote:
Yah-hah wrote:
Fa-Q wrote:Lol gutaw thanks...you know we run multis like headless poultry...lol and idk the chorus might change...but the beat is insane it fits perfectly...its funny Jus' lines are hella long and mine are hella sort and were gonna collab on the same song :p


Yeah man it's the yin and yang :P I got exrta long multi filled serious-all-the-time lyrics and you got those short multi filled serious/hilarious ryhmes and can flow off of eachother really good.

WORD. :smoking:


You know we could drop a triple collab nice and full of multis if somebody would be interested :whistle: :whistle:
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Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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Re: Fa-Q - I'll Fight Through Feat Yahhah

Postby gutawafang » Oct 5th, '09, 06:55

Somebody. :shifty:

:whistle: :whistle: :whistle:

LOL. Maybe. :whistle: :whistle: :whistle:

Not now. Prolly next time. :unsure:
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Postby Yah-hah » Oct 5th, '09, 06:56

gutawafang wrote:Somebody. :shifty:

:whistle: :whistle: :whistle:

LOL. Maybe. :whistle: :whistle: :whistle:

Not now. Prolly next time. :unsure:


Man I aint talking right now but in the future. maybe. just maybe :whistle:
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Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
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Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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Re: Fa-Q - I'll Fight Through Feat Yahhah

Postby gutawafang » Oct 5th, '09, 06:57

Yah-hah wrote:
gutawafang wrote:Somebody. :shifty:

:whistle: :whistle: :whistle:

LOL. Maybe. :whistle: :whistle: :whistle:

Not now. Prolly next time. :unsure:


Man I aint talking right now but in the future. maybe. just maybe :whistle:

Maybe man, maybe. :whistle: :whistle: :whistle:
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Re: Fa-Q - I'll Fight Through Feat Yahhah

Postby Fa-Q » Oct 5th, '09, 08:29

:o yes we all have to collab
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